Where the Ocean Kneels

Inspired by the 2024 U.S. "Cosmic Cliffs" stamp (Scott #5828), featuring a James Webb Space Telescope image of the Carina Nebula.

Dune d
               r
                  o
                     p
                         l
                            e
                                t
                                   s  cling to her curves,
Grains of time d i s s o l v i n g into umber skin.
                                                                                          o   o
A midnight-blue tide, sealed by the tinted side of m        n
                                                                                           s
Yearns to edge closer, to caress her ankles ~
For the ocean itself is enamoured by her magnetic pull.

Smouldering warmth envelops her ~ sharp as volcanic glass,
Caught between waves and e r u p t i n g sea beds,
Bringing forth hidden treasures; from chaos, brilliance arises.

Constellations f a l t e r beneath her gaze,
Stardust suspends mid-spiral to listen for her honeyed voice.

She is carved from molten hymns and the clay of restless ancestors.
She roams like a myth through the plane of existence,
Every besieged f o o t p r i n t leaves the earth a little more awoken.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Liguori Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Very nice Billie.
Jama Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Thank you ever so kindly, Robert. I love this new theme of us. There are so many to choose from and so many to get inspiration from. It was a joy to write for competition
Fowler Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations Billie! :)
Jama Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Thank you so much : )
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 1:51 PM
Love the beginning and “ She is carved from molten hymns and the clay of restless ancestors.”
Jama Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Thank you kindly dear
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace