Get Your Premium Membership

Where Snowflakes Sometimes Go

Where Snowflakes Sometimes Go Down by the shiny silvery bay, winter had returned in May with cherry blossoms blooming red, a snowflake fell and bumped his head. It had never happened till this day, what made the snowflake lose his way? “A gust of wind while in flight, thrust me left instead of right, seventy with a gentle breeze I knew I’d melt in these degrees. I’m usually in a snowy storm but now I’m feeling toasty warm the sun feels wonderful you bet, I know Jack Frost will be upset with me, and yet, oh yeah………………………………!!” Elizabeth Labadie-Reilly November 9/2015 Winter poem Contest (children)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/10/2016 4:10:00 PM
Great Write....David.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2015 4:15:00 AM
Captivating verse you have penned down, Liz. Congrats on your WIN in the Snow Poem Contest! ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2015 3:49:00 PM
This was fun to read. Grats on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2015 12:50:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Liz!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2015 8:21:00 PM
Liz, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2015 2:11:00 PM
Very beautiful Liz congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2015 11:40:00 PM
I love this poem!! It flows very well!! nice choice of words :)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things