Where Should We Go

Our way covered in mists
The path too narrow and meandering
Maybe patience we should hold
Lest down the cliff we will end

Slowly and carefully searching
The steps at a snail pace
These little steps count anyway
In tomorrow we won't be here still

Time is ticking against us
But in our circumstances it matters less
If we rash off the cliff will go
Losing everything -the track too hard to find

We are remaining with choices though
We go back, we wait
Or slowly we go ahead
Like a cargo ship on sea waters
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Date: 5/22/2022 1:16:00 AM
V nice poem just one problem I didn't understand anything but v good peom please don't post any more in future
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Robert Isaacs Chiwala
Date: 5/22/2022 2:21:00 AM
Oh my goodness thank you...it was really big deal though, love you too and be blessed!
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Anda Bhurji
Date: 5/22/2022 2:03:00 AM
I'm really sorry mate I was kidding you are a wonderful poet keep it up i love you and your poem have a great journey I am sure you are great poet and lovely person
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Robert Isaacs Chiwala
Date: 5/22/2022 1:22:00 AM
Oh wow, thank you
Date: 5/22/2022 1:02:00 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL!!
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Date: 5/22/2022 1:21:00 AM
Thank you very much
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