Where Old Memories Live

I find myself
In the middle of nowhere
And I don't see signs
Of anything familiar,
Yet I take turns
As if I'm going somewhere,

I meet new people
Strangers who welcome me
And I confide in them,
Unwilling to remember
My reason for being there,

But then I recall
Not charting a destination
For I had none,

No special place I had to be
Except to escape from there
Where old memories live. 

December 17, 2017
Placed 5th in December premiere contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 6/12/2022 9:12:00 PM
I feel sad for the person who has to shift from place to place with no clear destination in mind who finds a kind of relief in unburdening his mind even to strangers. This shows how tormenting and painful are the memories, a certain place hands down to him. In few lines you have delineated a sad human predicament. Very powerful poem
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Date: 1/8/2018 12:09:00 PM
Enjoyable little poem, Vijay. Clever idea...reminds me somewhat of Robert Frosts famous poem: "The Road Not Taken". All my very warmest regards as ever, Vijay - cheers! :) john
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/8/2018 3:34:00 PM
Thank you john..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 1/2/2018 5:00:00 AM
Hi Vijay, congrats for reaching top ten on best poems. Your poem reminds of Midnight cowboy somehow. Its so lonesome.and leaving behind some lousy memories. Loved it. Cheers Jannie
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/2/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Jannie--enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 12/21/2017 5:41:00 PM
Lovely evocative poem. Loved it, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/21/2017 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 12/18/2017 4:37:00 AM
A nice poem ... Congratulations on your win ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 12/18/2017 12:05:00 AM
Nice write Vijay. I feel like this often. Very creative and deep into the mind thinking.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:17:00 AM
Many thanks James..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/17/2017 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 12/17/2017 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay :) I love the unsettling feeling of this pen, so well done xomo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:15:00 AM
Many thanks Maureen..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/17/2017 8:36:00 PM
I'm back to say congratulations on your well-deserved win, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:14:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Janice..many thanks.
Date: 12/17/2017 8:29:00 PM
Sometimes in search of a destination - somewhere but nowhere in particular, where strangers can pick you up! Congrats Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:14:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Kim...many thanks.
Date: 12/17/2017 7:45:00 PM
Vijay, we all have memories we’d like to erase, nicely penned. Congrats on your win. John
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 12/17/2017 7:01:00 PM
Very well written Vijay...best wishes
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 12/17/2017 5:12:00 PM
I can relate to this Vijay and you expressed this very well! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2017 5:58:00 PM
You are right Heidi, most of us have been there at some point.. many thanks for your support.
Date: 12/17/2017 3:35:00 PM
Those old memories--we dread them, seek them, are sometimes trapped in them. Well-done, Vijay. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2017 4:58:00 PM
So true, Janice..appreciate your comments..many thanks.
Date: 12/17/2017 1:14:00 PM
What an awesome write. Short, but we are able to get lost in it. I'm impressed how well you accomplished that. Great read.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2017 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda for your wonderful comments.
Date: 12/17/2017 8:15:00 AM
So many have been there and felt these emotions Vijay... Old memories do not really go away, we just learn to deal with them... Excellent write...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2017 4:56:00 PM
So true..many thanks Silent One.
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