Premiere Contest WinnerWhere No One Waits

2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 19 
Sponsored by: Mark Toney 
Contest Judged:  10/3/2025 1:17:00 PM 
( 1st Place ) 

Written: September 27, 2025


No one calls her name
past the silent edge of her house.
No family voice calls her name.
The house is bare,
The quiet coils around her chest
heavy as a winter frost.

Empty shelves murmur back her longing.
No bread, no work,
only the rasp of breath stitching the silence
to measure the day.

The table bears a chair no one will fill…
she keeps it there
though no one comes.
It listens when she cannot speak,
it holds her secrets while the world looks past.

She cannot speak;
the streets do not bend to hear her grief.
People move past like shadows,
her sorrow clinging to the chill air,
her need folding into the city’s pulse.

Under the cloak of darkness...
she reaches for a mother long gone,
the hands that once held storms at bay,
the lullabies that stitched the dark
with tenderness.
Now even memory aches like an open wound.

And still—
each morning she rises,
pulls her body from the weight of despair,
plants her soles on the frost of morning
and begins again.

Not because it is easy,
not because someone will notice,
but because life…
even in its harshest silence…
demands she endure.
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Richards Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 4:59 AM
Being the winner in my One-liner contest (Aug 2026) prompted me to explore your poetry further. This is one of the best poems I've read for some time. It reaches recesses that the words alone only hint at, but that everyone recognise within themselves. A favourite.
Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:33 AM
Dear Rowena, the sorrow and loneliness is palpable and expressed with potent poignancy. Courage to endure is a special gift given to one with the will to persevere. Congratulations for your trophy win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Valasco Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 10:25 AM
Rowena, as a fellow distance runner, I truly appreciate your poem, both for the depth of grief, but for the depth of the challenge. So many times I’ve started a run only to stop, to question my goal for that run…but we keep moving forward, knowing the affect of completing the challenge makes us a little stronger for the next.
Valasco Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Rowena, as a fellow distance runner, I truly appreciate your poem, both for the depth of grief, but for the depth of the challenge. So many times I’ve started a run only to stop, to question my goal for that run…but we keep moving forward, knowing the affect of completing the challenge makes us a little stronger for the next.
Swan Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 2:43 PM
This is a very moving poem, a cameo of grief and living through it. The ending has a solidity that grounds her in the midst of pain, the value of life. J :)
Poetrysoup Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Exceptional
Toney Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 4:42 PM
Rowena, your poem highlights loneliness with “empty shelves,” silent rooms, and “a chair no one will fill.” Despite this, “She”chooses to rise each morning and endure. Love the resilience! Congratulations on your first place win on Mile 19 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 20 has already started.
Velasco Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 6:13 PM
Thank you so much! I’m truly honored and grateful...your words mean a lot, and I’m excited to keep writing for Mile 20!
Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 8:40 PM
Wow. This haunting tribute to 'life must somehow go on' really hit me hard. Bravo, Rowena.
Velasco Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 9:32 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m truly touched that the poem resonated with you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 5:06 PM
I felt the weight of sadness and sorrow in your poem. I can also feel the strength and courage in: she rises, pulls her body from the weight of despair, plants her soles on the frost of morning and begins again Inspirational and compelling poem.
Velasco Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 5:08 PM
The journey from despair to rising again is something I hope can inspire courage and hope in others as well.
Hind Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:26 PM
A powerhouse of a poem- it spells moving on, despire the frosty morning beginning,
Velasco Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 3:40 PM
Yeah, the frost might sting, but it’s just the start. Warmer days always find their way back.
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Sad and full of sorrow poem! Stand up stand tall.
Velasco Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 6:53 PM
Thank you! That’s exactly the spirit I wanted to capture—despite the sorrow and hardship, she finds the courage to rise and keep going.
Greenhough Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 6:07 PM
It is sorrowful that the girl is so alone. I can feel the grief of loss. This is a poem that describes great strength.
Velasco Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 6:52 PM
I appreciate your words. It’s a story of loneliness, yes, but also of endurance—the small, steady strength that carries her forward despite everything.
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