Where Ivory Perpetual Romance Prevails

He came to me with skin like ivory,
although his eyes and hair were dark as night.
He came with one year past his eighteenth year.
I, with one year shy of my adulthood,
was a woman-child with expectations
brimming of romance!

He was my Adonis and I, his virgin Madonna love.
Deep gazes and nibbles on the neck and ear lobes
comprised our innocent foreplay.
The main event of our romantic love
was everything 
(yet nothing more than long sweet silken kisses).
Romantic love was chaste,
unsullied by a future for us that never came.

Probably he’d had experience.
I’d never thought to ask,
but he instinctively knew better
than to ask more of me
than in that momet 
 I was prepared to give.

Nearly half a century since then has passed me by.
I do not know where my Adonis is,
yet here I am now writing poems
about that special night.
Other romances came and went.
Then matrimony bound me to a long-time fidelity.
However, the young Madonna that I was
one beautiful warm September night
appears from time to time inside my poetry
as I reinvent myself as Cinderella
because a chaste romance dwells eternally
in long smooth sweet silken kisses
where ivory perpetual romance prevails.


10/11/18 Inspired by a previous contest I did not get to in time
For Laura Loo's Any New Free Verse Poem Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/11/2018 1:16:00 PM
Andrea , Beautiful. A memory to be brought out and make us feel young again.
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Date: 11/10/2018 1:16:00 PM
Beautifully written, sweet, innocent passion. The memory of such moments are everlasting! Congrats, Andrea
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Date: 11/10/2018 5:52:00 AM
Great write :)
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Date: 11/5/2018 12:12:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Andrea - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend - this is absolutely wonderful - one of your best, and going into my favs! :-) <3
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Date: 10/28/2018 5:12:00 PM
Fills me with my own nostalgic memories of innocent love / romance. Such a lovely poem
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Date: 10/28/2018 3:40:00 PM
Loveley, Andrea. Suberbly penned. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 10/28/2018 11:37:00 AM
just beautiful lovely Andrea, I loved it today and also for my previous contest. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
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Date: 10/12/2018 6:54:00 PM
I am enchanted by your beautiful and endearing free verse, Andrea. Its sweet nostalgic loveliness is completely captivating! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/12/2018 11:01:00 AM
Very sweet and endearing story. There is nothing like young, innocent love... so full of idealism and endless possibilities! ;)
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Date: 10/12/2018 8:13:00 AM
"the young Madonna that I was one beautiful warm September night appears from time to time inside my poetry as I reinvent myself as Cinderella"; great line; we do sometimes have to reinvent ourselves; I've tried numerous times to reinvent myself as a billionaire but, it never seems to end right. Oh well, I guess we can't have everything but, I do enjoy your poetry and this was wonderful with some great imagery and it has a beautiful, smooth flow, as well.
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Date: 10/12/2018 4:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, what memories we keep within the confines of our minds, there to extract and live again when we choose. A heartfelt memory you place before us. I did so enjoy this read. A joy to let the imagery permeate the mind Andrea. A beautiful story of chaste-filled love. May your pen ever run gold my friend. I love the content. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/11/2018 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful memories of youth to keep tucked away in a romantic room in your mind. I enjoyed this Andrea. : )
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Date: 10/11/2018 6:18:00 PM
This beautiful written chaste-filled love story would do well in every contest. Beautifully done, innocence and heart-felt admiration for each other echoes from this wonderful poem, Andrea.
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Date: 10/11/2018 5:37:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your story of young love that seems to dwell in you eternally. For it to linger so long, the experience was special to you..as you have so well depicted. Best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 10/11/2018 5:33:00 PM
This is as enchanting as it is beautiful Andrea. What a charming love story you have brought to us tonight. Sad you missed the contest, this one would have done well.
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