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Where Is the Sun

This somber morn My heart weighs heavy As clouds drift slowly by As if stood up Left at the altar Where is the sun Jolted Such gravity This joyless day So intrinsically dependent On the life force fireball Up in the sky How will I get through the day Dare I hope to see the sun tomorrow O yes, there is always tomorrow AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on September 30, 2018

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Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/1/2018 4:35:00 PM

Very evocative of the pall of gloom created by a dreary, sunless day. I also liked the ending, as "there is always tomorrow"! Nice piece! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2018 5:54:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. Much appreciated.

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/1/2018 7:13:00 AM

Poignant words and yet that added touch of hope,which we all need.A lovely piece.Thank you Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Sylvia. Most appreciated.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/30/2018 10:54:00 PM

My expectations, comes not to me, empty handed I'm on the world scaffold- O' heart look at there- they, everyone live for tomorrow and I'm going to zero today......!/// nice

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thankfully, not every rainy day is depressing and unproductive... it's important to carry some of that sunshine inside us. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and lovely comment, Mahtab.