Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Where Is the Sun

This somber morn
My heart weighs heavy
As clouds drift slowly by

As if stood up
Left at the altar
Where is the sun

Jolted
Such gravity
This joyless day

So intrinsically dependent
On the life force fireball
Up in the sky

How will I get through the day
Dare I hope to see the sun tomorrow
O yes, there is always tomorrow



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Rhona Mcferran October 1, 2018 at 4:35 PM Very evocative of the pall of gloom created by a dreary, sunless day. I also liked the ending, as "there is always tomorrow"! Nice piece! ;) Line Gauthier October 1, 2018 at 5:54 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. Much appreciated.

Sylvia Coulstock October 1, 2018 at 7:13 AM Poignant words and yet that added touch of hope,which we all need.A lovely piece.Thank you Line Line Gauthier October 1, 2018 at 7:35 AM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Sylvia. Most appreciated.

Mahtab Bangalee September 30, 2018 at 10:54 PM My expectations, comes not to me, empty handed I'm on the world scaffold- O' heart look at there- they, everyone live for tomorrow and I'm going to zero today......!/// nice Line Gauthier October 1, 2018 at 7:34 AM Thankfully, not every rainy day is depressing and unproductive... it's important to carry some of that sunshine inside us. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and lovely comment, Mahtab.