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I was going through some of my notebooks yesterday and found this story my husband had wrote. I am not sure when it was written, so there is no date. I just had to share. I just couldn't resist writing a  Senryu to go with it. 

10/14/1943 - 8/29/2018

 

 

 

Where Is Land a Collaboration

I am scared, and I have never been scared in my life. We lost our radio, radar, and other electronic navigation gear when we came through the Bermuda Triangle. One of the old salts aboard this rusty gray bucket of bolts they call a tramp steamer said, we must have offended King Neptune. It is a known fact that the ship cheated Davy Jones' Locker three times when it was running convoys during WWII. Where the storm came from, no one knows! Thirty-foot waves of blue-green foamy water are breaking over the bow flooding the main deck and throwing a salty mist spray over the bridge. The off-duty watch are confined to their racks for safety while the ship bobs and rolls like a roller coaster in the trough of the waves. Many lie there and pray as they listen to the moans and groans of the ship-expansion joints as the ship twist from side to side. Some of the sounds, sound human and I'm not so sure that they're not. I felt as if someone was calling me to come and join them in the briny deep. By: Poet Sonny Roper lacking gallantry heave round in Satan's abyss death clock off duty By Poet 8/17/2021
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Schiavina Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 8:04 AM
An exciting full of action winning poem. Congratulations on greatness team work. Smartly done.
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Eve, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Wonderful picture. I love all of it. Seas can be deadly. Have a blessed day.................
Shaw Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:19 PM
Eve, how lovely that in the end this has became a joint effort between the two of you, you have helped to make sure his words are not forgotten, by all accounts a hallowing story, with a dramatic picture, and a Senryu that as articulates the whole feelings and depth of the story, scary stuff, but, loved it . . . : )
Kannan Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 12:24 AM
So deep and powerful... Your husband had written a beautiful dreadful story and you have written a powerful haiku in the end... This is a special haibun...
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 11:15 AM
thank you for those wonderful words hugs
Kannan Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Don't worry... He will be reading this now and smiling beside you...
Roper Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Thank you, Supraga, for your kind words. I should had found it along time again. It breaks my heart that he didn't share if he did I don't remember.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:22 PM
wow, that is so powerful, Eve . he really captured the feeling of danger and you capped it off wonderfully!
Roper Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 9:18 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Proxenos Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Wow so great you found your husbands notes and thus inspired to write this awesome Haibun - I'm certain he is very proud of this tribute and your talent. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Please go to Soupmail
Poet Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Wonderful Haibun, associated with a lovely tribute to your husband. May he RIP
Edmonds  Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:05 PM
What a wonderful find Eve, a treasure your husband left behind. A lovely memorial tribute… Belle
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 2:48 PM
such vivid description Eve, so glad you found it and posted it, I remember the fun I had writing limericks with sonny, :-) hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:01 AM
What a collaboration, Eve. So many images. Reminds me of the turbulence of life. Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Wow, what a terrifying experience Eve, so many ships and aircraft have met with tragic consequences in that area of the Bermuda Triangle. Tom
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