Black Eyed Susan Poet Rondeau

Where Is Caylee Rondolet

Where is Caylee?
A little girl with smiling eyes
Where is Caylee?
No one’s seen her around lately
But her mother swears she’s alright
Now Grandma’s nose smells homicide
Where is Caylee?


(*this is supposed to capture the moment in time before they found her body --. for those of you who don't know the story, Caylee disappeard and her mother Casey Anthony told lie after lie about where she was. Caylee's grandmother got suspicious when she smelled the scent of a dead body coming from Casey's trunk. people and police searched for the little girl and eventually found her body buried in a trash bag, duct-taped. Casey just went to trial for it and was acquitted of the murder, much to the dismay of the general public.)


7/25/11

for Dr. Ram's contest

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Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2011 at 11:50 AM I would like to know exactly what happened to Caylee. so this is the one you were talking about? I wish I had time to soupmail you, just quickly, line 4 has no rhyme with the other lines. However, I very much liked your poem, Susan. It is like a rondeau with the repeating line. rondeau twice the size of rondolet but I very much enjoy them. well, I finally got to soup but now my time has passed and I need to get to church. HOpe to see more new poems from you. Keep up on those challenges, sweetie!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 30, 2011 at 7:42 PM exquisite piece Susan and we will never really know the answer am afraid..one beautiful little girl .. we all have theories of how it happened..but why? great points u make here luv..

Jack Horne July 29, 2011 at 2:37 PM Lovely tender write - and what a sad story. This sort of thing happens a lot over here too, unfortunately

Dr.Ram Mehta July 29, 2011 at 1:24 PM Thanks for the entry

Carolyn Devonshire July 28, 2011 at 2:31 PM My heart goes out to little Caylee's grandmother. No one will ever know the truth about what really happened to her, Susan. And it appears that nobody will be held accountable for her death. Terrific entry for Dr. Ram's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Zzzzz Zzzzz July 28, 2011 at 12:18 PM An emotive subject, that anyone with a heart can relate to. Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 26, 2011 at 8:21 AM It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Susan. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta July 25, 2011 at 8:58 PM Thanks for the entry, Susan

Sara Kendrick July 25, 2011 at 6:19 PM Good luck in the contest..Good topic chosen about recent news..I believe that it is almost true to form..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

David Williams July 25, 2011 at 5:04 PM hey Susan, i like this as a poem, but don't know who Kaylee is?, good luck with it, David

Joyce Johnson July 25, 2011 at 4:54 PM And it does. How sad. Her mother will pay, Some way. In answer to your quetion, yes there was a line missing. I have it fixed. Thank you. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2011 at 4:30 PM a riveting write that crushes my bones,susan... a topnotch artword with winning wishes to you! :) huggs,nette