Where His Crown Fell

He didn't beg to stop, he didn't whimper and whine; he showed
                his strength and humility all while wearing a painful crown of thorns. 
 
                       He took a beating of beatings done so out of insanity and jealous 
                done so out of jealous insanity and rage: for those stripes driven into 
                his flesh were for our iniquaties and by his grace are those stripes our
                healings.

                       He carried the weight of our sins humility as he lifted and carried 
                 his cross struggling against the spitters and mockers,amongst the violators
                 Yet not once did his crown fall to the ground.
 
                       He was to die right there as a thief, while a thief was released for all me
                  and all of humanity,yet done with such courage and humibily didn't lose his 
                  sanity through all of the miss/dealings.

                        They nailed him to the rugged cross with three rusty ole' spikes spit and
                   gambled for his only belongings ,pierced his side with a sword and waited for 
                   death to surely soon to arrive.for he then uttered out "Father forgive them for 
                    they know not what they do!

                          As he then forgave them he bowed his head and as he passed on the 
                    crown of thorns fell in that very spot and yet until today the most beautifulest
                    rose in memerance of his pain.

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