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He tried to cope, as they continually besmirch him When he was thrown into the throes of their ways His tears soaked his life, as he hoped to be sojourn Then his heart barely beat, his breath now slower He couldn’t escape the truth of all that was now lost He lay beaten, until he saw the pinion of a celestial angel Her lissome flight swept to him, lifted him, released him Before his entry to firmament, where he found repose Heidi Sands 8/24/18 Placed 5th in the eight word challenge 4 poetry contest. Words required: celestial, besmirch, pinion, throes, sojourn, lissome, firmament, repose. .

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Date: 6/6/2018 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Well done!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/6/2018 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Susan :) Have a nice day!
Date: 6/5/2018 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Subimal :)
Date: 6/4/2018 7:55:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words ,Heidi , with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 6/4/2018 2:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 9:44:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 6/4/2018 11:26:00 AM
Nice write Heidi, thanks for your entry in my contest, congrats in placing in this hard to judge contest!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 11:29:00 AM
Thank you for the opportunity to be in your contest. I appreciate the placement John. Thank you :)
Date: 5/24/2018 4:13:00 PM
You did a great job including the given words in just a few lines..very well done..best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 5:19:00 PM
Thank you for all your support Vijay. I appreciate your comments :)
Date: 5/24/2018 10:50:00 AM
(((WoW)))...superbly done Heidi...a winner in my court...love and light...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thank you WW. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 5/24/2018 10:49:00 AM
A sad verse but one offering hope, great use of the words for contest. Good luck. Tom.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 11:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Tom :)
Date: 5/24/2018 9:26:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely way to go...an imaginative write...All the best Heid
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Arturo :)
Date: 5/24/2018 8:17:00 AM
Very nicely done Heidi...GL in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 5/24/2018 8:07:00 AM
I think you made excellent use of the 8 words, Heidi, A sad story indeed, Happy Thursday xx00
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Happy Thursday :)
Date: 5/24/2018 7:44:00 AM
Sad there are so many bullies in the world. "Blessed are the meek for theirs is the kingdom of heaven." Nicely written, Heidi. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 7:59:00 AM
That is true John, very sad. Thank you for your kind comment :)

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