Where Have I Been

Great pick-up line “where have I been all your life?” That's a reason for concern but should break the ice Guarantees further contact Perhaps even sexual combat In fact, what the hell am I doing here to be precise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Turner Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 12:45 PM
I suppose it would all depend on who or what one is trying to pick up, jack.That sexual combat sounds interesting!
Ellison Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:53 PM
ALWAYS!!! Even at 82, it's still number one on my so-called mind!!!
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Jack saw a beautiful sight/ Naked young fillies so bright/he rubbed his eyes / And to his surprise/ They flashed him and gave him a fright /
Ellison Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Are you sure he didn't rub her things??? Naughty!
One Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 8:56 AM
yu love your sexual combat lol..
Ellison Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 10:18 AM
But I do draw the line though when they use a harmful weapon like wooden club!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:19 AM
LOL! ;D
Ellison Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Silly........
Michael Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:17 AM
A little wrestling under covers...I will try your pick up line one of these days...All the best Jack
Ellison Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Lotsa luck... you're gonna need it!!! LOL
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