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Where has she gone?
I can't seem to find her
though I try to play her part
imitating her laugh
coaxing my lips 
into one of her smiles
mouthing her words
singing her songs
her dance is my dance
I leave nothing to chance
Practiced through and through
what else can I do?
I try
real hard
I try

Where has she gone?
I can't seem to find her
the laugh is laughable, unreal
the smile wobbly, no glee
the songs, off key...off key
the dance, lackluster mockery
I try
real hard
I try

Where has she gone?
You know...that young woman
the one not terrorized by her mirror
whose songs were solo praiseworthy
her hair, shampoo ad noteworthy 
the life of the party girl
who swayed and who twirled
spinning their world
making them stare
unaware...of time
caught in the moment
Sublime

Where has she gone?
If you find her
I'm looking for her, you see...
she visits now and again
and then it's like....
it's again way back when
when youth and beauty
were on full duty

Where has she gone?
Why won't she stay?
Help me make her stay
because that woman of yesterday
has to help me be
the woman of today!

Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/7/2016 10:18:00 PM
I could have sworn I commented on this one, but it seems to have vanished ... thankfully you have a much better chance at finding that woman of yesterday, then I do in finding my lost comment. Surely you are not a shadow Eileen ... for the person you are today has laughed more, cried more, and all around DONE more than she ever did. You are all of her ... and more. Beautifully written, my friend!
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Date: 4/3/2016 2:54:00 PM
I know where she went, Eileen! I saw her...looked her in the eyes, watched her beautiful smile...heard her voice...and I know that deep inside she is still the same woman of yesterday! I'm adding this to my favs lady:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:06:00 PM
I wish......you knew her way back when. You'd be enchanted, dear. This woman....is but a shadow. Thanks for lifting my spirits.
Date: 3/26/2016 3:02:00 PM
I had a comment for this. Then, I read Charmaine's comment...and I will utterly repeat what she said. Fly higher, my friend.
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:01:00 AM
She is right there inside you sweet friend.. A fave.
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:57:00 AM
she still lives deep within the new soul, and she'll always be out on her own choice, excellent write Eileen, lovely
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Date: 3/15/2016 11:55:00 PM
Amazing! I'm sure many will be able to relate Eileen. I still think you need a new mirror so that you can see the incredible woman we see. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/15/2016 8:08:00 PM
That's the trouble with growing old my little Desert Orchid, we start living on old memories instead of making new ones. You've got a long way to go yet, so you better get a new camera lol. Besides everybody goes through this, I remember when ..................lol Take care, Richard
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:59:00 PM
If you're looking in the mirror for your reflection, you're looking in the wrong place. The photo I look at everyday, that girl is a knockout. That's one of the sexiest smiles I've ever seen. Really love the introspective write but aging is a natural process for all. Peace pretty lady:)
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Date: 3/14/2016 8:03:00 PM
Love the introspection Eileen. Your words speak loud.
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