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Where Has My Protector Gone

Dreaming of pink flamingos, their beauty,
their bite…dreaming of flamboyant flamingos,
so close to shore; I’m in the ebb and flow.
Where has my protector gone as I regard
the flock; awash with blue sea foam.
Dreaming of their carrot necks; nibbling
the serenity of their stretch; dare I touch
the earth or sky, the sandy beach, question why.
Where has my protector gone as my eyes stray;
why am I pulled by the surf; do I dare mingle?
A sudden shock of night in the brightness of bed.
a solitary digit in the bird’s beak. confident that
my husband will save the day, but it’s not day.
The pressure put upon; I can still feel the squeeze
as I awake in the third strange room of the week.
My protector lies near me, oblivious of my plight.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 6:13 PM
awesome write...a bit dreamy and almost existential. Especially liked the last line...gave me pause
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Thank you, Sara!
DiMino Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:31 AM
A FAV! Great poetry.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 10:31 AM
Thank you, Joe! Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 12:26 AM
It sounds like a strange travel dream. I hope it sorts out. Your description warns me to have a soothing cup of tea tonight.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 4:44 AM
Yes, it was. lol. Hope you went for the soothing cup. Sip slowly..stay warm. Hugs, Hilda!
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 8:36 PM
Answer to the 64-million-dollar question: Your protector has gone to sleep. He doesn't work nights anymore. lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 4:45 AM
Truly…lol! Thanks as always for the laugh. Hugs
Hind Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 8:12 PM
Wow, Kim, this is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. I missed your work so much, daily looking for it. I think you're pretty much my fav poetess. <3 :) This is so beautiful, but has a certain existential sentiment to it. It's beautiful, but I feel sad. Thanks for writing again. Love- and hugs,
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Paige, I am humbled but still you make me smile. And yes, we do pack varying emotions in ourselves that end up in our writing. Big hugs! Glad to be back but grateful for a restful break. ~ Kim
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