Where Does a Poem Live

A poem lives and it breathes
  in the now, in the present

But its home spans the past
  and the future, omnipresent  


  
   ~ with a special Thank-you! to 
       Swetha Vangaveti for the 
        last word of the poem :)
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Vangaveti Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:04 AM
Muse that drives words is omnipresent :)
Wolf Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Swetha, I think that your outstanding choice of the word 'omnipresent' works so well---that I'm simply going to 'co-opt- it right into the poem, if you don't mind... Check it out again, and you'll see the change! THANK YOU! Best wishes, Gershon
Ravidas Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 6:05 PM
Choree?! How comes?) This is nice, Wolf.
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 7:06 PM
Appreciated, Kurt. Let all of our poems live and breathe... ~ Wolfman
Wilson Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Note Chaim Bialik learned at Voloshin, and he became the 'Poet of Israel' but went off the 'Derek', I think b/c of Ego which Rav Nachman says 'Overcoming the Ego is the reason man was created', a challenge for all creative people, but Bezalel successfully dealt w creativity and the Mishkan wouldn't have otherwise been built. I also read your other poems, especially on creativity and you deal w Ego well. Chaim
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:49 PM
Chaim, this comment makes my day, my week, my month, my year, maybe my life. I am humbled by your assessment... And thanks for the education on Bialik. I hadn't realized that he was at Volozhin. Always wondered how a fellow like him knew so much Torah. Thank you again, and best wishes. ~ Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. I wonder if some poems will be resurrected after they have laid unread for years? Sara
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Wow! Amazing concept, Sara: 'Poetic Resurrection.' … Emily Dickinson's poems were, of course, discovered after he passing and most were not published for decades. Thank you for your observation, and Best Wishes! ~ Gershon
Romios Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Very perceptive! Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Thank you, Panagiota, (and thanks for ignoring the fractured rhyme scheme!) :) gw
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