Trina Layne Poet Concrete

where do teardrops go

                      sweat fertilizes                                                                   teardrops 
            
             urine                        soil                                                  capture                   to
     
    our                                             &                                   angels                                  fashion 
 

  flush                                                dissolves              while                                                    double 
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we                                                                 in bubbles                                                            rainbows


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we flush our urine
sweat fertilizes soil & 
dissolves in bubbles
while angels capture teardrops
to fashion double rainbows

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Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2026 at 5:06 AM So interesting! Nothing “wasted.”

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 2, 2026 at 1:49 PM A well composed verse, so lovely, and very meaningful. I enjoyed this a lot, Trina. :)

Alison A Smith June 29, 2026 at 1:30 AM Interesting fotm for this poem. I love its message.