Where Crimson Bleeds Its Rose

Under a blue moon He becomes my dream A secret uncloaked Emotion unveiled A mystery revealed Existence of warmth between my subconscious and implicit knowledge ..And it is there `Neath the soft spot of this heart where crimson bleeds its velvets upon his bare breath It is there where my blushed lips loose their virginity Where my fair cheeks suffuse with rosy glow It is there where fiery needs are fulfilled Fervent desires scorched Candlelit pleasures beheld It is there where alluring visions embrace my suppressed memory and take over this barren soul As his ardent voice calls in an enticing whisper and a unique accent into my left ear My love... Mon petite fleur.. Mi amor... That is a preserved time An uncloned moment where my unwholiness becomes whole That is the minute His glancing eyes capture my own Only until... Mr Sandman leaves behind Dry proposals on wet sand Early mist envelops the bridge Aurora glows in new awakening Last zephyr breeze fades from my cheek Then He is gone Forever gone
A revised repost~Not for the rose contest..but thanks for Vie's Roses contest and wonderful Rose poems I decided to revise this post and repost,till the muse plays along.
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Bordner Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 3:03 AM
Continued..."Existence of warmth between my subconscious and implicit knowledge..." that's sensuous psychology, your intuition emerges from the bloom of desire's full maturity. "Unwholiness becomes whole..." brilliant command of language, your fantasy becomes truth. The romance is so organic and warm on the tip of the senses. The pairing of ardent and whisper is very complementary. This is a great poem Charma! J.A.B. A FAV!
Bordner Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 2:44 AM
It is there, within the intimacy of blood, desire and touch that your heart understands the signal of infatuated eyes...soul relating to the breath of love's console Charma. The vividity of your velvet blossoming is so pure and sensational, your desire to be rediscovered with genuine appreciation for your gift of fresh passion so enchanting...J.A.B.
Goswami Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:04 PM
"Mr Sandman leaves behind Dry proposals on wet sand"...Excellent...original...I loved it...Best wishes to you.
Lariviere Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:32 AM
beautiful
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 6:25 PM
congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan x
Onclaud Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 4:10 PM
definitely a POTD, charms... so wonderfully scribed.. huggs
Pike Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 2:31 PM
wow , this is captivating . A sense of feeling your emotions . Excellent writing
O.J. Hunt Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Beautiful write Charmaine; full of vibrance and emotion! (very 'romantique' :-) Keith :-)
Yvonne Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations Char on your beautiful poem being chosen as poem of the day.
Meade Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:10 AM
The mighty romantic pen flows again -- sweet, sad but somehow still hopeful with memories . . . may the Mr. Sandman fill your dreams with love!! Congrats on POTD
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 10:22 AM
I was pulled into and lost in the beautiful, romantic words...then those last lines...oh, so heartbreaking. Congratulations to you on being chosen TPOD and Merry Christmas...Rhonda
Roper Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Beautifully written, Charmaine, congratulations on poem of the day, 7 Blessings and Merry Christmas to you and yours
Mcdaid Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 9:17 AM
truly very beautifully painted piece charmaine excellent pen dear pal
Andresen Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 8:38 AM
- This is just so beautiful! - Congrats with P.O.T.D. !! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas, Charmaine ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations on being featured sb .....a magnificent piece.....hugs Tim
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 10:29 PM
Such poignancy here in this one, sweet lady. forever gone. So heartbreaking! Very romantic too.
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 10:25 PM
can't wait to see the card. Now let me read this one.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 4:27 PM
Dropping by to say hi.
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 4:17 PM
One word...Magnificent!
Carroll Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Mystical and romantic..
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful and sad leaving a tear in the Highlanders eye. I'm always amazed reading your poetry Charmaine, as your words are like brush strokes lighting up a blank canvas. This one like many others of yours has that wow appeal. High scores and fav's, with your poetry it's the rave, James :) xx
Onclaud Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 11:05 AM
flowing like love's river.. so enchanting, charms... great job of making me visualize this as if I were in the poem... huggs
Callus Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Gentle and mellow, and yet deep and powerful. Charm, you have this ability to express yourself passionately and clearly without crossing border lines, staying within the limits of 'decency'. Another brilliant romantic poem that deserves a top rating and a fav. // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 4:27 AM
Absolutely marvelous, dear Charmaine!
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 11:53 PM
This poem could have been 1000 pages long, the Title grabbed me, and I wouldn't have put this one down till the last line! Beautiful in all ways! A7
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