Get Your Premium Membership

Where Crimson Bleeds Its Rose

Under a blue moon He becomes my dream A secret uncloaked Emotion unveiled A mystery revealed Existence of warmth between my subconscious and implicit knowledge ..And it is there `Neath the soft spot of this heart where crimson bleeds its velvets upon his bare breath It is there where my blushed lips loose their virginity Where my fair cheeks suffuse with rosy glow It is there where fiery needs are fulfilled Fervent desires scorched Candlelit pleasures beheld It is there where alluring visions embrace my suppressed memory and take over this barren soul As his ardent voice calls in an enticing whisper and a unique accent into my left ear My love... Mon petite fleur.. Mi amor... That is a preserved time An uncloned moment where my unwholiness becomes whole That is the minute His glancing eyes capture my own Only until... Mr Sandman leaves behind Dry proposals on wet sand Early mist envelops the bridge Aurora glows in new awakening Last zephyr breeze fades from my cheek Then He is gone Forever gone
A revised repost~Not for the rose contest..but thanks for Vie's Roses contest and wonderful Rose poems I decided to revise this post and repost,till the muse plays along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 12/22/2014 3:03:00 AM
Continued..."Existence of warmth between my subconscious and implicit knowledge..." that's sensuous psychology, your intuition emerges from the bloom of desire's full maturity. "Unwholiness becomes whole..." brilliant command of language, your fantasy becomes truth. The romance is so organic and warm on the tip of the senses. The pairing of ardent and whisper is very complementary. This is a great poem Charma! J.A.B. A FAV!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/22/2014 2:44:00 AM
It is there, within the intimacy of blood, desire and touch that your heart understands the signal of infatuated eyes...soul relating to the breath of love's console Charma. The vividity of your velvet blossoming is so pure and sensational, your desire to be rediscovered with genuine appreciation for your gift of fresh passion so enchanting...J.A.B.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/20/2014 3:04:00 PM
"Mr Sandman leaves behind Dry proposals on wet sand"...Excellent...original...I loved it...Best wishes to you.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/20/2014 4:32:00 AM
beautiful
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 6:25:00 PM
congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan x
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 4:10:00 PM
definitely a POTD, charms... so wonderfully scribed.. huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 2:31:00 PM
wow , this is captivating . A sense of feeling your emotions . Excellent writing
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 1:44:00 PM
Beautiful write Charmaine; full of vibrance and emotion! (very 'romantique' :-) Keith :-)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations Char on your beautiful poem being chosen as poem of the day.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 11:10:00 AM
The mighty romantic pen flows again -- sweet, sad but somehow still hopeful with memories . . . may the Mr. Sandman fill your dreams with love!! Congrats on POTD
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 10:22:00 AM
I was pulled into and lost in the beautiful, romantic words...then those last lines...oh, so heartbreaking. Congratulations to you on being chosen TPOD and Merry Christmas...Rhonda
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 10:08:00 AM
Beautifully written, Charmaine, congratulations on poem of the day, 7 Blessings and Merry Christmas to you and yours
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 9:17:00 AM
truly very beautifully painted piece charmaine excellent pen dear pal
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 8:38:00 AM
- This is just so beautiful! - Congrats with P.O.T.D. !! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas, Charmaine ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2014 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured sb .....a magnificent piece.....hugs Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 10:29:00 PM
Such poignancy here in this one, sweet lady. forever gone. So heartbreaking! Very romantic too.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 10:25:00 PM
can't wait to see the card. Now let me read this one.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 4:27:00 PM
Dropping by to say hi.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 4:17:00 PM
One word...Magnificent!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 4:05:00 PM
Mystical and romantic..
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 1:00:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful and sad leaving a tear in the Highlanders eye. I'm always amazed reading your poetry Charmaine, as your words are like brush strokes lighting up a blank canvas. This one like many others of yours has that wow appeal. High scores and fav's, with your poetry it's the rave, James :) xx
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 11:05:00 AM
flowing like love's river.. so enchanting, charms... great job of making me visualize this as if I were in the poem... huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 6:00:00 AM
Gentle and mellow, and yet deep and powerful. Charm, you have this ability to express yourself passionately and clearly without crossing border lines, staying within the limits of 'decency'. Another brilliant romantic poem that deserves a top rating and a fav. // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2014 4:27:00 AM
Absolutely marvelous, dear Charmaine!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2014 11:53:00 PM
This poem could have been 1000 pages long, the Title grabbed me, and I wouldn't have put this one down till the last line! Beautiful in all ways! A7
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things