Where Crimson Bleeds Its Rose

Beneath a half moonlight

you become my dream

a secret uncloaked

emotion unveiled

existence of warmth

between subconscious

and implicit knowledge

And it is there

'neath the soft spot of my heart

where crimson bleeds its velvets

upon your bare breath

Its there where blushful lips

loose their virginity

Where my fair cheeks suffuse

with rosy  glow

Where fiery needs are fulfilled

fervent desires scorched

candlelit pleasures  beheld

Its there were evanescent  visions

take over control

take over this barren soul

As my ardent voice whispers

beneath the tender of your ear

~~~ Mi amor~~

That is the preserved moment

our unwholiness is whole

The moment, your eyes 

capture my own

Only till......

Mr sandman leaves

early mist envelops the bridge

aurora rises in new awakening

and you fade away like zephyr breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fraser Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Dreamy and sensual Charmaine, love it :) James....
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 8:43 AM
thanks for your sweet comment about me, Charma. This poem represents YOU and how you paint magic with your beautiful words.
Jordan Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 3:49 PM
A truly beautiful romantic poem, with some of the best imagery I've read in a while (where crimson bleeds its velvets upon his bare breath). Amazing... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 2:17 PM
passing through for a second haelping, charms.. missed you on drake's last show... :) huggs
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 5:13 AM
Nice moonlight play portrayed.... Thnx Charmaine for visiting my work Crossings.... yeah, after long time posting at poetrysoup..... I do write but not posting here nowadays.... best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Rhinem Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Ps., I'm Glad That Your Priceless Beauty Mentioned Such For Yes, I Too As Thought To Do Earlier, Am Going To Favour Your Erotic In Exotic Beautiful Painting ˜ Also, Thank You, Sweet Beautiful Charmaine, For Your Lovely Visit ˜ Love Always, John
Rhinem Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 3:14 PM
† 'Our Unwholiness Is Whole.' Wickedly Wanton Desires Burning Deeply As Love's Lavender Lit, Lanterns Buried In Her Sea, Of Joyful Crimson Pleasures Crawling Through These Shores Soaked, Sands Her Beauty Melting Amid, Shameless Hands The Clock Timeless, Sighs, Then Screams, 'Baby, Ow Sweet Baby.' ˜ Love It Tinkerbell! ˜ Always, John
Ainsley Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 10:09 AM
Charmaine; You are a blazing torch of golden light . Romance and passion come to life with a vengeance in this work. I am just so happy I found it. Thank you from the bottom of my Gothic heart.
Horsman Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 7:31 AM
here in the UK, we have a saying for the extraordinary " I'm Gob Smacked" and believe me that is an understatement .. amazing poetry i have just had the honour of reading...
Sanders Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 4:00 AM
Hold on!!!!! you are killing me, I got to rewind this poem and read it again, Is this free, I feel like I should send you a couple dollars because I should have to pay for poetry like this. Wow Wow Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent poetry poet. Wow!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 12:33 AM
Thanks for your visit I really appreciated your comment.
Puddifoot Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 5:47 PM
I'm never disappointed when I read your poetry; this has such an ethereal, otherworldly quality to it, yet at the same time it is suffused with an earthy passion - wonderful! and thanks for stopping by to read my work :)
Williams Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Charma, this is excellent, the images you create are just wonderful and it is very well thought out, good job...David
Poet Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 12:16 PM
WoW...AMAZING!Love this Charmine.
Jones Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 8:52 PM
Lovely lovely.....
Guzzi Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Oooooolala really steamy little one!! I liked it, I want to hear more of this persons adventure. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 3:17 PM
You are the mistress of the sensual.....where every line is Charma....always refined but beautifully filled with the fire of passion! Another that sends prickles one's senses!
Ryerson Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 4:36 AM
Oh my Charma...The queen of romance strikes again and what a title! I LOVE this, especially the sad, longing conclusion...Have a wonderful, blessed day my beautiful and talented friend - Tim
Gasun Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 10:40 PM
This is extremely beautiful and mesmerizing write my dear friend Charmaine. Sooo love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing you precious gems & superb talent to me.I'll come back to read more. More power & blessings to you. Thank you so much as well for your precious time to comment on my blogs, my poems etc. So much appreciated. love lots & big hugs, Leonora
Adams Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 6:29 PM
this is sensual and beautiful ...very nicely penned :)
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:22 PM
- Oh..... this taking my breath.... so beautiful written !!!! - love it !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 1:45 PM
waves of emotion caressing my soul, charms... enjoyed the reading of an exquisite romantic scroll... hope you can make it this sunday on drake's show... :) huggs
Ellison Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Eileen took the words right out of my mouth... "Beautiful and enchanting...sensual and satisfying" Love ya... hugs, Jack xox
Carroll Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 10:39 AM
Hi Charmaine, lovely poesia romantica! Ken
Tacito Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 10:34 AM
Holy mother of all that is good, Batman! Such captivating sensuality. "Where blushful lips lose their virginity", DAMN!!!!! Kudos on the "Mi Amor" touch of Spanish. =) Powerfully elegant!
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