Where Are You?

I want him so bad, where are you?
My heart I want to give to him, where are you?
Everyday I think about you, but don't know you, where are you?
I've been lost for so long without you, where are you?
I don't understand this predicament I'm in, where are you?
I think I love you so much, where are you?
I want to tell you how I feel and how I've been feeling, where are you?
Is this a game of hide and seek I continue to play with my heart, where are you?
Well maybe I'm asking for too much, because I still don't know where you're at!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/12/2010 10:53:00 PM
I want to thank all of you special individuals for your comments and kind words. Carol if I ever need help I'll be sure to ask for guidance from you or anyone that can help. Thanks again!!
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Date: 6/11/2010 1:32:00 PM
I like how the rhetorical questions move this poem along. It seems as if someone must be hiding. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:52:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/10/2010 1:55:00 PM
I really appreciate the feedback, I'm new to this so I hope that I provide exceptional poems for all readers. Thank you!!
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:49:00 AM
Dear Shawntai: Very good and emotional poem. I look forward 2 reading more of your poems. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:38:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shawntai. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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