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Where Are the Snows of Yesterday

ETERNAL recollected memories 
Despite the mists of EVERLASTING time.
Four years have passed so slowly.
BOUNDLESS scenes recorded.
Thus I still reminisce…..

The garden was pure delight,
The evening scent spread afar.
I wondered if I could have 
A moment of peace and quiet,
Wandering along the ENDLESS paths.

I saw the most beautiful hibiscus,
Red flaming in the crepuscular,
A single ladybug ran here and there
on a deep red fire of its large petals,
in the hushed sighs of the evening.
Was it searching for its mate?
It’s search UNBROKEN never giving up.

In the patches of well-tilled soil
Grew carpets of yellow tulips,
Heralding the coming of spring.
Dragonflies over the BOTTOMLESS pool
While crickets sang their LIMITLESS melody.

I moved on admiring nature’s life.
There in the middle of the garden
Another pond adorned the landscape.
Three white swans floated around,
Everything seemed so peaceful…..
A bell rang heralding closing time.
On such a day we were on a bench
Kissing as if time had stopped.
Still, the bell incessantly rang.

Alas, it was time for me to go home,
Which I reluctantly did, well knowing
My house was simply hauntingly empty.
I could not help but continue with my INFINITE grief.

Placed 1

8 June 2021
Writing Prompt - Endless - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this beautifully penned and emotional poem and I like you images too, peace _Constance
Buhagiar Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 1:33 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your placement.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. Sad yet wonderful. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.............
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 11:49 AM
So very sad
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Very descriptive, expressive and emotive work that you have penned in this contest entry. I can't imagine the grief one feels when their mate dies. Even the swans mate for life and are really depressed when the mate dies. Thank you for dropping by my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 12:56 PM
You have wonderful happy memories Victor, I know loneliness is not easy to cope with. Love the imagery in your verse. Tom
Kannan Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 9:24 AM
This is so deep, Victor. A lovely walk with great imagery but a touching climax...
Edmonds  Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 6:33 PM
A lovely walk through that garden with you, it’s wonderful Free Verse poetry of a wonderful memory. Your sadness and grief is understood Victor, it’s to be hoped that writing poetry helps… Belle
Daniel Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Memories that enable us to go on, you have brought it out well, Victor, a heartfelt, soul-tugging, touching poem:)
Poet Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 4:05 AM
Excellent write, I enjoyed reading this great poem, I have felt your sorrow Victor but the words placement is just great. they're wonderful.My very best wishes for a contest win.
Y. Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:01 PM
WoW! Victor, You used the chosen words to pen a poignant, heartfelt write. Our memories link us to loved ones no longer here. She is forever in your heart. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening-Alexis
Rose  Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 6:40 PM
As long as you have a poem in your heart, you are never truly alone Victor, you have too much to offer here, :)
Ball Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:37 PM
These memories though painful now will become a comfort. By remembering these times you are keeping her with you in your heart. Don't stop dreaming and remembering my friend. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Your imagery is awesome, Victor. Enjoyed the stroll with you through the garden--heard the bells ringing. Excellent as always.
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 12:17 PM
There is such vibrant floral beauty, color and natural charm, in this poem tinged with sadness, Victor. Hugs and blessings, Evelyn
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Your wove the words in so beautifully my friend. your grief is so evident throughout so many of your poems Victor, this is beautiful in its sadness, hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:50 AM
I have felt your grief in many of your poems, and though sad, they're wonderful.
Alex Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Romantic Question and answer.
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