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ETERNAL recollected memories Despite the mists of EVERLASTING time. Four years have passed so slowly. BOUNDLESS scenes recorded. Thus I still reminisce….. The garden was pure delight, The evening scent spread afar. I wondered if I could have A moment of peace and quiet, Wandering along the ENDLESS paths. I saw the most beautiful hibiscus, Red flaming in the crepuscular, A single ladybug ran here and there on a deep red fire of its large petals, in the hushed sighs of the evening. Was it searching for its mate? It’s search UNBROKEN never giving up. In the patches of well-tilled soil Grew carpets of yellow tulips, Heralding the coming of spring. Dragonflies over the BOTTOMLESS pool While crickets sang their LIMITLESS melody. I moved on admiring nature’s life. There in the middle of the garden Another pond adorned the landscape. Three white swans floated around, Everything seemed so peaceful….. A bell rang heralding closing time. On such a day we were on a bench Kissing as if time had stopped. Still, the bell incessantly rang. Alas, it was time for me to go home, Which I reluctantly did, well knowing My house was simply hauntingly empty. I could not help but continue with my INFINITE grief. Placed 1 8 June 2021 Writing Prompt - Endless - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/19/2021 12:30:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this beautifully penned and emotional poem and I like you images too, peace _Constance
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:33:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your placement.
Date: 6/14/2021 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. Sad yet wonderful. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.............
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Date: 6/13/2021 11:49:00 AM
So very sad
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Date: 6/13/2021 6:21:00 AM
Very descriptive, expressive and emotive work that you have penned in this contest entry. I can't imagine the grief one feels when their mate dies. Even the swans mate for life and are really depressed when the mate dies. Thank you for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 6/12/2021 12:56:00 PM
You have wonderful happy memories Victor, I know loneliness is not easy to cope with. Love the imagery in your verse. Tom
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Date: 6/12/2021 9:24:00 AM
This is so deep, Victor. A lovely walk with great imagery but a touching climax...
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Date: 6/11/2021 6:33:00 PM
A lovely walk through that garden with you, it’s wonderful Free Verse poetry of a wonderful memory. Your sadness and grief is understood Victor, it’s to be hoped that writing poetry helps… Belle
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Date: 6/9/2021 9:34:00 AM
Memories that enable us to go on, you have brought it out well, Victor, a heartfelt, soul-tugging, touching poem:)
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Date: 6/9/2021 4:05:00 AM
Excellent write, I enjoyed reading this great poem, I have felt your sorrow Victor but the words placement is just great. they're wonderful.My very best wishes for a contest win.
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:01:00 PM
WoW! Victor, You used the chosen words to pen a poignant, heartfelt write. Our memories link us to loved ones no longer here. She is forever in your heart. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening-Alexis
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Date: 6/8/2021 6:40:00 PM
As long as you have a poem in your heart, you are never truly alone Victor, you have too much to offer here, :)
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Date: 6/8/2021 2:37:00 PM
These memories though painful now will become a comfort. By remembering these times you are keeping her with you in your heart. Don't stop dreaming and remembering my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/8/2021 1:29:00 PM
Your imagery is awesome, Victor. Enjoyed the stroll with you through the garden--heard the bells ringing. Excellent as always.
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Date: 6/8/2021 12:17:00 PM
There is such vibrant floral beauty, color and natural charm, in this poem tinged with sadness, Victor. Hugs and blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 6/8/2021 12:08:00 PM
Your wove the words in so beautifully my friend. your grief is so evident throughout so many of your poems Victor, this is beautiful in its sadness, hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:50:00 AM
I have felt your grief in many of your poems, and though sad, they're wonderful.
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Date: 6/8/2021 11:50:00 AM
Romantic Question and answer.
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