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Whenever the Weather

Whenever the weather you get Is wild and windy and wet The parrot is talking And people are squawking If I should be walking a pet The wind blows a breezy disdain It sings with an easy refrain It helps me to cope With a quiver of hope And a sliver of soap in the rain The weather is wild today A couple is ready to play In a tryst with a twist And a warm, woolly mist With a strength to resist by the way Now the weather is sunny and hot And the people are sweating a lot So why do they scurry Back home in a hurry If rain is a worry or not. Submitted to "The Weather" poetry contest Sponsored by Angela Tune on December 29, 2021

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Date: 1/6/2022 3:39:00 PM
back with my congrats, sweet friend!
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Date: 1/5/2022 7:21:00 PM
Wonderful internal rhyme with a lyrical rhythm that begs for a song. Congratulations on your worthy win Bryan. New year blessings xxoo
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Bryan Norton
Date: 1/5/2022 9:39:00 PM
Thank you Connie. Thank you for reading my poem. But the song is in my latest poem, Forever and Ever. Best wishes, Bryan.
Date: 1/5/2022 7:03:00 PM
amazing poetry dear poet, congratulations on your win, splendidly written
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Date: 1/5/2022 9:41:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose Rose. Have a good night. Best wishes, Bryan
Date: 1/5/2022 12:23:00 PM
I love the rhythm and flow of your poem. Really catchy. Great write. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 1/5/2022 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna. Most of my poems are like this. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading. Best wishes!
Date: 1/5/2022 10:00:00 AM
Bryan, your poetic style never fails to deliver. Great work and well done. Cheers - Gary
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Bryan Norton
Date: 1/5/2022 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Gary. Have yourself a great new year.
Date: 12/29/2021 12:40:00 PM
You have such marvelous sense of meter. Not that many do, so be proud to have it. It makes your poetry sing!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 1/5/2022 12:27:00 PM
You have a marvelous sense of . . .everything! Have an incredible year. Luv, Bryan

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