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When You'Re With Me

To the tune of “ Sixteen Going on Seventeen from “The Sound of Music” When you’re with me, I can feel everything, a body’s meant to feel Butterfly kisses, tell me what this is My heart is yours to steal When you’re with me. I can do anything, climbing the highest peak Your love updates me, invigorates me So I can hardly speak What do I care, if others say that ours is puppy love They wouldn’t dare, if they could play just what I’m dreaming of When I’m with you, We can do anything, no one can force our hand Suitors may show up, trying to blow up They’ll never understand When you’re with me, I can see everything, that there is left to see There's just one thing, just one undone thing Seeing you marry me

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Date: 11/29/2021 7:23:00 AM
Quite lyrical ! Goes well with the tune. Though the love may be teased as 'puppy love' by elders what does a boy of his late teens care... a dare devil who is up to anything!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/29/2021 7:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Valsa !!
Date: 11/19/2021 12:44:00 PM
Awww, that is super sweet. Good job.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/19/2021 1:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Jayme !!
Date: 11/19/2021 5:22:00 AM
Mike, this sings with true romance. Hopefully she would decide that he was the one too. My parents had a love like this. My dead misses mom so. <3
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/19/2021 5:40:00 AM
That's so hard to live with , I hope they will be reunited some day! Thanks Kim!!
Date: 11/18/2021 12:00:00 PM
"Butterfly kisses, just what I’m dreaming of" And lips touch like a whisper, oh, what bliss. This is so beautiful and romantic. There's nothing wrong with *Puppy Love*. It is soooo sweet. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2021 1:17:00 PM
I’m so glad you liked it, thanks Brandy xxoo
Date: 11/18/2021 11:59:00 AM
- This was a beautiful song ... so loving <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2021 1:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 11/18/2021 11:41:00 AM
absolutely precious piece Mike, it fits the music so well, love the sound of music, wont be long before its on the tv again as it always is at Christmas:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 5:00:00 PM
so glad to be back reading your lovely lines xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2021 1:16:00 PM
So happy to see you back!!! Thanks Jan xxoo
Date: 11/18/2021 7:14:00 AM
You got me singing it now Mike. Perfect lyrics. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2021 7:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Tom!!
Date: 11/18/2021 6:19:00 AM
Great one Mike! Sweet. Happy Thursday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2021 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, Happy Thursday xxoo
Date: 11/18/2021 6:06:00 AM
Enjoyed the tune reminiscing in youth. Beautiful lyrics, Mike. Win BIG.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2021 7:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Vijay!!

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