When You'Re Smitten

They say love is blind, but that's in hindsight
   When you're smitten, everything feels right
Open your eyes to the foibles of your true love
   The romance is over ~ off come the gloves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Faulkner Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 11:33 PM
Yes, new love so often is blind , until its not (just a small note - on the last line, I would have put 'off come the gloves' - but that's just me)
Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 9:41 PM
You know, I like your suggestion. I think I'll take it. Thank you so much, Michelle! :) gw
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