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When You'Re Smitten

They say love is blind, but that's in hindsight When you're smitten, everything feels right Open your eyes to the foibles of your true love The romance is over ~ off come the gloves

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Date: 8/23/2019 11:33:00 PM
Yes, new love so often is blind , until its not (just a small note - on the last line, I would have put 'off come the gloves' - but that's just me)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/24/2019 9:41:00 PM
You know, I like your suggestion. I think I'll take it. Thank you so much, Michelle! :) gw

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