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When You'Re Mine

When you're mine 
my feelings are fine
when your not 
my feelings are shocked
I gave you my heart 
I gave you my soul 
but most of all 
I gave you a show 
my feelings are hurt 
because of your work 
I must go now to lie down 
I must be asleep to be at peace 
this is the street of Saint Louis 
when street lights go off 
its nothing but a block 
with no laughing kids 
and no playful songs 
when your mine
I definitely might die 
in this lonely sweet bed 
is where I say amen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/18/2012 8:00:00 PM
Lovely poem and congrats on being featured....Patrick
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Ebony. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:13:00 AM
I liked this poem a lot. I can tell you truly feel how you write and I respect that. Welcome to PoetrySoup. :P
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:30:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup...enjoyed this poem Ebony!
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:09:00 AM
Ebony I like it..David
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