When Your Eyes Beckon Me

where crystals gleam i want to lie where the scented lily opens reveals its stamen tender as babies breath as unavoidable as our sun's and moon's provocative union as desirable as a cooling undertone on a hot humid day as necessary as the blistering heat a dream yet to be dreamt womanhood sings and i respond in kind climb beyond frozen minds where pianos open radiate warmth cradle purity my will nestled in the notes where crystals gleam i want to lie Armand Hamouth

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Date: 3/1/2020 6:49:00 PM
Oh well penned, very nice read.
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Date: 2/27/2020 3:11:00 PM
Armand, this reads so harmonious to the ear as a soft song carried by the breeze to calm. I loved this wonderful poem! xxoo
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Date: 2/27/2020 7:50:00 AM
Wonderful sentiments. Love it. God Bless you, dear friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/26/2020 10:42:00 PM
So good
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Date: 2/26/2020 11:52:00 AM
Armand (Maurice) your poem is so beautifully penned, I was lost in the words _Constance
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Date: 2/26/2020 11:49:00 AM
WOW, your free verse is exception Armand I am SO happy to see you back my friend and Cas has posted a fab poem today wish soup was like the old days do you remember the fun we used to have as the four musky tears lol:-) but folk have moved on and soup will never be as it was :-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:56:00 AM
Time for the four musketeers to hail again.
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