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" MY SOUL " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of flower and nature

When young,
 
Intoxicated my soul seemed to be
  
As she was drinking constantly from youth's 

Fine wine

But 

Now that I old came to be

My sobered soul is wiser, thus yearning, only

To delight herself, with what is: just, holy, and 

Divine!









© Demetrios Trifiatis
       02 June 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/2/2021 10:32:00 AM
WoW! Demetrios, Your verse is filled with much wisdom. As one gets older and wiser, they see things different. Excellent job my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/2/2021 10:54:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you visiting and commenting, my dearest friend, Alexis. Thank you so much for your gracious visit and comment! Hugs xxx
Date: 6/2/2021 7:49:00 AM
Wonderfully written, my friend, the older one grows, the more gems of insight and souvenirs they gather. And Ignore the pleasures of youth in favor of a respectful leaning toward the sublime.
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Date: 6/2/2021 10:52:00 AM
Yes, the majority of people, as they grow older, are more prudent. However, there are those who linger behind realizing not that the time has passed. Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment! Blessings.
Date: 6/2/2021 4:40:00 AM
As we age we leave behind the youthful pleasures--tilting towards the divine. Love the vibrant yellow flowers!
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Date: 6/2/2021 5:15:00 AM
Yes, that is the right thing to do, my dearest friend, Vijay. Apparently, though, not all are willing to do so! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment. Blessings.
Date: 6/2/2021 4:11:00 AM
So true Demetrios, with advancing years comes pearls of wisdom and materialistic things fade away. Tom
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Date: 6/2/2021 5:13:00 AM
This is generally true, my dearest friend, Tom, unfortunately, not all of us are getting wiser. Thank you very much for your kind visit and comment! Blessings.
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