When You Wish

Can you hear me as I'm falling?
I am calling out your name.

You have watched me almost touched me
by the ocean and the plane.

I will guide you, be beside you
Crossing Rivers from a far.

Have you guessed yet?
This is best yet.

I do twinkle
I'm your star...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Khemlani Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 12:30 AM
Make a wish - I am your star! I like the positive outlook and it simple brings a smile on one's face. Nice one
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 11:13 AM
I love this! I like the way you lead us to the finish line! Good riddle!
Loving Iii Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 4:07 PM
congradulations on being featured this week. long time.
Chappell Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 9:02 AM
excellent write here my friend thank you duncan
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October 14, 2010 at 6:36 PM
Hi, Sharon~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Very meaningful and deep write, Sharon
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Sweet little rhyme Sharon, a joy to read so early this Scottish morning >> James
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