When You Open Your Eyes

Its late at night and your scared from the storm,

your cold from the icy air and u need to be warm.

ur eyes are closed but its just darkness you see

but when you open your eyes its gona be me,

me thats gona hold you close in my arms all night

whispering in your ear that everything is gona be alright

me thats gona stay up with you till ur sound asleep,

lookin at your beautiful face that makes my heart leap

i know your scared but i dont want you to be,

im right here with you and i will never leave

so sleep tight and dream about a future that will surely come,

dnt dream about negative pasts or ppl.. they were just bein dumb.. 

but when you do wake up and finally open your eyes

the storm will be over & u'll be welcomed with a breakfast-in-bed surprise :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/6/2016 10:45:00 PM
DYSTANY CUNNINGHAM, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:21:00 PM
nice to read this poem again
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Date: 4/8/2012 3:15:00 PM
Thanks Everyone :)
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:19:00 PM
Dystany, great poem,,.. have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD
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Dystany Cunningham
Date: 4/8/2012 3:16:00 PM
thank you :) and you have a great Easter too!
Date: 4/7/2012 5:24:00 PM
Like it Dystany, wish you all the best. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Dystany Cunningham
Date: 4/8/2012 3:16:00 PM
Thank you ^-^
Date: 4/7/2012 1:39:00 PM
Smile ˜ As A Man Love The Breakfast In Bed ˜ As A Child Of, "My Beautiful Heavenly Father" * I Have No Fear. ˜ I Would Wish This For All &, Love The Love ˜ Always, John!:) ˜
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Dystany Cunningham
Date: 4/8/2012 3:17:00 PM
:) Thanks
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