Premiere Contest WinnerWhen You Need To Be Held

Surrounded by seven cherubs of cheer,
Just recently passing my 100th year,
I’ve been standing here on this perch,
In Little Falls, MN’s Our Lady of Lourdes church.

Most of the day I’m alone simply pining away,
Surrounded by stained glass scenes of yesterday.
Watching glorious beams of color jump left to right,
As east to west the Sun travels ever so bright.

Mostly alone with a visitor or two,
One of my favorites is when you are in view.
You study my features with such wonder and awe,
I can see deep within, you are on your last straw.

Walking in with face down slowly plodding as one,
Genuflecting with pain in respect of my Son.
Shuffling into the pew, your body sulking and sits. 
Looking up at me, into my eyes, your stare hits.

I wish I could reach out and hold you in my arms,
Wrapped in my blue cloak, protecting you from harms,
Rocking your fears away, with a simple motherly sway,
Breathing into you new life, taking away all your strife.

Times like these you need, comfort and touch,
I thank God above for others providing so much.
It is now that I listen for, the eery creak of the door.
For a heavenly sent friend, to cradle you until the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Canerdy Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Congrats on your well-deserved first-place win with this well-written, creative piece, Michael! Janice
Vacek Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Thank you. Personification came with ease as she has come to life when I am down trodden. Better memory is one of the fruits of sadness.
Shaw Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 2:07 AM
Well done Michael and congratulations on your 1st place. Beautiful words and great visions. I can tell you enjoyed writing it as their is a wonderful flow, kind regards, Kevin
Vacek Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Kevin, writing has become very important in my life. I just began writing earnestly a little over 1 month ago.
Raynes Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:35 PM
wow, this write is so unique, this stood out for me so much, loved every bit of your write here Michael. congratulations
Vacek Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:51 PM
Thank you for your comments. This is a great honor. The fresco I write about is imprinted on my mind. Writing this poem was easy, as the pen just kept moving, and the rhymes flowed simply. Recognizing beauty is one of the foundations of love. Creation is Glorious.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:56 PM
OH my goodness. What a GEM this is, Michael. I forgot I had old comments to get to. I am so glad I happened to look way down at the bottom and find the comment you made on my poem, so I could come and read this beauty. A FAVE
Vacek Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:59 PM
Thank you for your early confidence. Your comments have propelled me in my writing.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:56 PM
If it were my artwork contest, I would give this first place I think.
Vacek Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Thank you Andrea. It was a fun write. The pen kept moving in the right direction.
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