When You Left....

when you left, you introduce me to depression and isolation
when you left , you took my elation
when you left  me you gave me the gun and said this is the only way to forget me.
your only an illusion in my dreams., your only a feeling in my heart, your only a 
memory in my head your a virus in my body, but yet you have more control of my 
life then i do..
but yet it hurts so much just thinking of you,  i hate the feeling when i still think of 
you, 
. you left me so dead. my eyes cant even cry. my wrist do all the crying for 
you, and my worm blood dripping down my arm.. is the replacement of the 
warmth feeling you use to give me

now without you  my life is like a mold ,disgusting with no form my hear is torn,

here i stand with open arms. accepting what the outcome of this is. their isnt a 
need for a goodbye, everyone knew my life was taken when she walked away,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 6/22/2016 10:14:00 PM
ERWIN, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:09:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Erwin. Love, Carol
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