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When You Died

Worn like the darkness, the stars Silently reflecting the peacefulness, The joy and wonder, the promise Healing the past with sensitivity, gestures Blessing the spirit… Cloaked in light, healing From the mystery, the memory Glowing like the new dawn, rising Beyond the azure, through the violet Vibrant as the skies when they smile Beautiful, flowing, wistful… Tired like the passing fancy, Who soothes then bleeds doubt, Quieting the moon, the stars, shimmering Glistening beneath the darkness, hope Lasting like embers, warm Just bright enough to say a prayer… This is the moment when my heart broke Became a throbbing ache, burning Away the hopes and dreams, the faith Feelings both lasting and pure, exposing Brokenness that seemed beyond healing, Shattered beyond believing…. This moment, your passing From this life into the next life Where I hope that You will see what it means To listen to His glorious authority Wiping away every doubt you might have felt, Every worry – every transgression With love that abides in the light – He’s forever!
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Romios Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Regina, a perfect poem. We lost a family member last night, so it was a source of comfort to me. Thank you, thank you Pangie
George Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Afterlife will be a state when we will be free of all doubt, all worry and every transgression and when the soul will be under God's caring authority. Lovely poem Gina
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 3:30 AM
- Described so beautifully, Gina - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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