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When You Die - Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest

When you die You are gone It's goodbye No one stays On this earth For all days It is said Past is past Dead is dead Done is done And for whom? Everyone You won't know When it's your Time to go Need I say? That's the world That's the way That's the trade That's the rule No one made So come on Live your life 'Fore it's gone 5/11/21 Just Stating The Obvious Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/20/2021 3:26:00 PM
Good work, Charlotte! Short lines and to the point! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/19/2021 10:12:00 PM
Bravo! Congrats on your win, Charlotte
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Date: 5/19/2021 5:00:00 AM
Congrats my friend :)
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Charlotte, short , but states a good argument.
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Date: 5/18/2021 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations Charlotte on your well deserved win with this write of advice… Belle
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:23:00 AM
Good advice, Charlotte, good luck in the contest and welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Charlotte Betts
Date: 5/12/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you! Glad to have found this community

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