Dennis Spilchuk Poet Free verse

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When Would It Be Most Appropriate to Say I Love You

When Would It Be Most Appropriate to Say, I Love You?

“When would it be most appropriate to say I love you?
	Today, tomorrow—sunrise, sunset;
		Would it make a difference?
			I love you all the time.”

In moments, circumstances change lives,
But I will always be there for you
	(I am more than flesh—cold and indifferent).
		At your side: in pain, in birth,
			In joy, and happiness; unto death.

My love for you exceeds these boundaries.
My commitment to you is forever.
	Together, our house will never fall,
		Nor will my eyes dim of your beauty,
			Even with age.

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Line Gauthier May 4, 2018 at 9:56 PM Congrats on your win with this emotive poem, Dennis. Dennis Spilchuk July 7, 2018 at 9:52 AM Sincerely grateful, thank you.

Susan Gentry May 3, 2018 at 10:37 PM Congratulations on your placement. Enjoyed it. Dennis Spilchuk July 7, 2018 at 9:52 AM Thank you for your support.

Beautiful Scars May 3, 2018 at 2:53 PM the depth and strength of forever commitment. Beautiful words written...Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo Dennis Spilchuk July 7, 2018 at 9:53 AM Wonderful encouragement and support, thank you.