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When Would It Be Most Appropriate To Say, I Love You? “When would it be most appropriate to say I love you? Today, tomorrow,—sunrise, sunset; Would it make a difference? I love you all the time.” In moments, circumstances change lives But I will always be there for you; (I am more than flesh,—cold and indifferent.) At your side: in pain, in birth, In joy and happiness; unto death. My love for you exceeds these boundaries. My commitment to you is forever. Together, our house will never fall Nor my eyes dim of your beauty. Even with age.

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Date: 5/4/2018 9:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this emotive poem, Dennis.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/7/2018 9:52:00 AM
Sincerely grateful, thank you.
Date: 5/3/2018 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Enjoyed it.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/7/2018 9:52:00 AM
Thank you for your support.
Date: 5/3/2018 2:53:00 PM
the depth and strength of forever commitment. Beautiful words written...Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 7/7/2018 9:53:00 AM
Wonderful encouragement and support, thank you.

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