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When Worlds Collide

A benevolent sun yet shines on worlds gone amok Entry for James Edward Lee's "Pick A Picture What Cha See" Contest (Picture No. 1)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2019 6:33:00 AM

I have read your creative Monoku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 4/2/2019 1:40:00 PM

Back with big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/1/2019 10:16:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Robert. Well penned.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2019 7:36:00 PM

GREAT Win, Robert. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2019 1:46:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful win, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/1/2019 1:33:00 PM

My favorite,, you did good! congrats. BG

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 3/31/2019 5:16:00 AM

Deep and loaded as a statement giving us much to think on in todays climate. My mind turned to the ozone and environment, UV rays etc. Perfect picture imprinted on the mind leaving us pondering! Well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2019 9:06:00 PM

wonderful. Despite everything, the sun rises and sets on us still.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/30/2019 3:34:00 AM

Your words are so true Bob, and I think there is still worse to come - good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs, Jenny.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/29/2019 9:26:00 PM

I haven't seen the pic but I love your line, it is THE TRUTH and full of optimism, hope and faith. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2019 1:24:00 PM

- A great description, good luck in the contest :) - (The world is gone amok, a long time ago Bob :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2019 12:02:00 PM

It will probably the only thing will last. Robert, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/28/2019 9:53:00 PM

I have never heard an adjective more appropriate for the sun in the reading of thousands of poems, my friend.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/28/2019 4:40:00 PM

Good one Mr. Bob! BG

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/28/2019 4:35:00 PM

Yes indeed, thankfully the sun does not judge. Well penned, Robert.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/28/2019 4:14:00 PM

yes, hope can change this world filled with fury, bob... splendid thoughts; congrats too for your top award in a recent challenge!..huggs

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 3/28/2019 4:16:00 PM

Thank you, nette for your kind comments re this one and the Greenhorn Cowpoke win. Keep on writing for our delight - Bob