When Worlds Collide

A benevolent sun yet shines on worlds gone amok

Entry for James Edward Lee's "Pick A Picture What Cha See" Contest
(Picture No. 1)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 6:33 AM
I have read your creative Monoku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Roper Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Back with big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Congrats on your win, Robert. Well penned.
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 7:36 PM
GREAT Win, Robert. Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:46 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful win, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gorelick Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:33 PM
My favorite,, you did good! congrats. BG
Docherty Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 5:16 AM
Deep and loaded as a statement giving us much to think on in todays climate. My mind turned to the ozone and environment, UV rays etc. Perfect picture imprinted on the mind leaving us pondering! Well done!
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:06 PM
wonderful. Despite everything, the sun rises and sets on us still.
Proxenos Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:34 AM
Your words are so true Bob, and I think there is still worse to come - good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Godwin Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 9:26 PM
I haven't seen the pic but I love your line, it is THE TRUTH and full of optimism, hope and faith. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:24 PM
- A great description, good luck in the contest :) - (The world is gone amok, a long time ago Bob :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:02 PM
It will probably the only thing will last. Robert, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Krutsinger Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:53 PM
I have never heard an adjective more appropriate for the sun in the reading of thousands of poems, my friend.
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Good one Mr. Bob! BG
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Yes indeed, thankfully the sun does not judge. Well penned, Robert.
Onclaud Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 4:14 PM
yes, hope can change this world filled with fury, bob... splendid thoughts; congrats too for your top award in a recent challenge!..huggs
Hinshaw Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Thank you, nette for your kind comments re this one and the Greenhorn Cowpoke win. Keep on writing for our delight - Bob
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