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When Words Cut Like Blades

safe haven for poets once existed till destructive forces came on board those who seek just to hurt others end up harming themselves several such people have inflicted pain here though no one would call them “writers” juvenile antics and hateful comments are their only legacies through profanity and threats digging holes to poetry’s Armageddon alienating those who won’t strike back or resort to petty, personal attacks they say, "You're the most despised among the soup clan" spew lava-like proclamations hold grudges for years when they don't place in a contest where only quality work won evil doers adopt numerous aliases to favorite each of their own poems but poets can easily identify them as their “attempts” at poems all sound the same if one who can’t write, gives you a contest win what is it you have really won their friendship? No, they don’t have friends do you compare your poetry to theirs who wants to share on such a site where mean-spirited people call the shots other places enforce rules to promote civility let your conscience guide you to these sites
August 18, 2014

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Date: 8/30/2014 9:03:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats on ur awesome winning write dear Carolyn! U hv always inspired n guided me, thanks for being there!
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:41:00 PM
yes, what Jan says, HARD HITTING. People like these make life less tolerable for the rest of us. But Jan is right. That's what the block button is for. you are so good at giving inspiring comments, I always remember this about you. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:51:00 PM
Hard hitting poem Carolyn! I was taught if you cant say anything nice don't say anything at all! we all share the podium so many congrats on a heartfelt write. ignore the negative comments you are inspirational and an amazing writer - we have a block button - use it - problem solved! Hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/29/2014 10:47:00 PM
Jan, my mother taught me the same thing. I try to find something I admire in each poem and focus on that in comments. If I can't find something worthy of a comment, I just don't leave one.
Date: 8/24/2014 11:40:00 AM
love the digging holes line - very powerful : )
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:35:00 AM
THIS poem speaks Loud and Clear! Carolyn, You have been a miracle to me and my dreams, and my career, and in ways you probably would never dare take credit for. You are a strong woman with a HUGE voice! Your writing is EPIC. If there is still disrespect going on to you, Well, I just can't comprehend it...It just doesn't make rightful sense, I believe it, but DONT WANT TO believe it! HEy on a lighter note....I am glad you like my sexy Poem. Some mistook it for vulgar, It's just how I get down!~
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/20/2014 10:01:00 AM
Gee, I really liked your passionate poem, JS. I found nothing vulgar in it at all. Don't understand how people could interpret it that way.
Date: 8/18/2014 3:55:00 AM
Very powerful write Carolyn ! But truth tastes bitter n that's it ! I know it hurts but one needs to be really strong to face the real world,, not all r alike my friend! Forget miseries n live to ur full, every rose has a thorn! Still we love roses!
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Date: 8/18/2014 3:09:00 AM
This is a really hard hitting write, Carolyn. It is hard to be the target of cruelty. I hope you haven't experienced this personally. I've suffered at some point from people labeling me...It hurt...really badly. I do hope peace can come back to this place...Several aliases is a scary thing...I'm Eileen! Nice to meet you! :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/18/2014 4:14:00 AM
Hi Eileen. It's 5 a.m. and I haven't slept yet, but tomorrow I will read your work. I'm sorry if you have had experiences that hurt. There used to be two poets with multiple aliases, but now there's only one.

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