Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Fibonacci

Notes About The Poem

Inspired by this quote: 

"Honesty is the first chapter of the book of wisdom. ~Thomas Jefferson"

When Wisdom Walks

WHEN WISDOM WALKS

Lies,
shams,
they cloud
the truth's eyes.
They seed buds of sin
which unfolds to depravity,
as they... can smother hope or stroke all lobes of the mind
but if we let honesty spearheads our deeds then there we permitted wisdom to walk...
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Sponsor	Rob Carmack
Contest Name	Fibonacci 
==Placed 1st==

O.E. Guillermo
12:32 pm,  March 14, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A April 2, 2015 at 7:16 PM hehhehe,, Here I am again, checking on your reply... you so sweet...LINDA Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2015 at 10:54 PM :P! :D!

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2015 at 10:52 PM OLIVE, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 21, 2015 at 2:23 AM thanks much Lolly Linda.. :)!

Kim Merryman March 17, 2015 at 5:02 PM Great fibonacci, Olive! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 19, 2015 at 6:49 AM Thank you Kim :) I appreciate it.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi March 17, 2015 at 8:43 AM Go Olive GO! Congratulations on your win. Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 19, 2015 at 6:47 AM thanks much Debbie.. :)! wee!

Kp Nunez March 16, 2015 at 5:15 PM Wow kabayan, top tier! Congrats! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 19, 2015 at 6:41 AM thanks much KIm.. :)!

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2015 at 2:17 PM Congrats on your awesome win..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 19, 2015 at 6:32 AM Thank you Sara.. :) I appreciate it.. :)!

Casarah Nance March 16, 2015 at 8:30 AM Nicely done! Grats on first place ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 19, 2015 at 6:31 AM thanks much Cassie.. Congrats too. :)!

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 11:52 PM OLIVE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 19, 2015 at 6:30 AM thank you Skat.. :)!

Abdul Malik Mandani March 15, 2015 at 8:59 AM Words of wisdom. Congrats. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 17, 2015 at 7:54 PM Thanks much Abdul.. :)! Congrats too.. :)!

James Fraser March 15, 2015 at 7:32 AM Hiya Oliz, many congratulations little one on your Top Spot with this short form packed solid with sheer wisdom. Your poetry always thralls me completely. Blessed Sunday, hugs//James ;-) xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 17, 2015 at 7:40 PM Thanks much Dino James.. :)! weeeeee! hugs aplenty!!! :D!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 15, 2015 at 7:19 AM Beautiful Wise words. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 17, 2015 at 7:25 PM Thank you Dane Anne.. :)! God bless us all.. smiles back.. :)!

Paul Callus March 15, 2015 at 6:42 AM It is always wise to live honestly! I love your reasoning, Olive_eloi! Congratulations on being placed 1st:)) Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 17, 2015 at 8:37 AM Thanks much Paul for loving my reasoning.. :) hugs back,. you won too. :D!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 15, 2015 at 12:38 AM Wow Olive such words of wisdom,, congrats on top podium! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 17, 2015 at 8:31 AM Thanks much Dr. Upma.. :)!

Eve Roper March 14, 2015 at 9:47 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win. a 7 Blessings dear friend Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 16, 2015 at 8:41 AM Thank you Eve.. :)! I am so glad you liked it.. :)!God bless you!!

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2015 at 9:21 PM Congratulations on your win. I just knew he would love this! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 16, 2015 at 8:34 AM thanks much Becca.. :)! COngrats too.. :)!

Jan Allison March 14, 2015 at 8:20 PM dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 16, 2015 at 8:27 AM thanks much JAn.. :)! hugs back.. :D!

Rob Carmack March 14, 2015 at 8:04 PM Olive, loved your poem. Perhaps sometime, you could help me get Andrea out of her grammatical coffin for an overdue break. :) Congrats and TY for entering. Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2015 at 9:19 PM hahaha!!! I quite enjoy my coffin!!

Sandra Haight March 14, 2015 at 7:53 PM Congratulation, Olive, on your top win! Wow, girl, you are on a roll! Way to go. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 16, 2015 at 8:06 AM thanks much Sandra.. :)! this my first try and am glad the judge liked it.. :)!

Kim Shaw March 14, 2015 at 7:23 PM The winner!! Congratulations Olive! So well deserved. I love your wisdom. Awesome write. Hugs, Kimberly xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 16, 2015 at 8:05 AM Thanks much Kimberly,,. hugs back too.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2015 at 6:49 PM a lovely message of wisdom, sweetie. IN that last line, it would be improved if you said after the word deeds: we would be permitted wisdom to walk (the word then is not necessary and by removing it, you could add in the needed words "would be" Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 16, 2015 at 8:03 AM thanks much Andrea.. :)! I don't really what topic I shall choose for this contest but as I researched I was inspired further that words must be chosen carefully.. hence, this lead me more to choose a subject more seriously.. :)! thanks!

Jan Allison March 14, 2015 at 8:03 AM Wise words ineed Olive - Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 15, 2015 at 5:33 AM thanks much Jan.. :)! Congrats to.. :) hugs back!

James Fraser March 14, 2015 at 7:06 AM Yep, no doubt about it. Your titles are like lures Oliz. Love the seams of wisdom here, top marks indeed, 7 up and a fav. Love it hugs aplenty//James xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 14, 2015 at 8:14 AM Dino James, I was attracted to the mathematical way this form has.. :D! but when i tried it on writing its kind hard as really you must think of the words to make your point straight and clear.. :) I was thinking of a good topic to start.. then this came.. thanks much!!!..//olive eloisa hugs!!