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When Wisdom Walks

WHEN WISDOM WALKS

Lies,
shams,
they cloud
the truth's eyes.
They seed buds of sin
which unfolds to depravity,
as they... can smother hope or stroke all lobes of the mind
but if we let honesty spearheads our deeds then there we permitted wisdom to walk...
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Sponsor	Rob Carmack
Contest Name	Fibonacci 
==Placed 1st==

O.E. Guillermo
12:32 pm,  March 14, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/2/2015 7:16:00 PM hehhehe,, Here I am again, checking on your reply... you so sweet...LINDA Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/26/2015 10:54:00 PM :P! :D!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/20/2015 10:52:00 PM OLIVE, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/21/2015 2:23:00 AM thanks much Lolly Linda.. :)!

Kim Merryman Date: 3/17/2015 5:02:00 PM Great fibonacci, Olive! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 6:49:00 AM Thank you Kim :) I appreciate it.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/17/2015 8:43:00 AM Go Olive GO! Congratulations on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 6:47:00 AM thanks much Debbie.. :)! wee!

Kp Nunez Date: 3/16/2015 5:15:00 PM Wow kabayan, top tier! Congrats! :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 6:41:00 AM thanks much KIm.. :)!

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2015 2:17:00 PM Congrats on your awesome win..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 6:32:00 AM Thank you Sara.. :) I appreciate it.. :)!

Casarah Nance Date: 3/16/2015 8:30:00 AM Nicely done! Grats on first place ! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 6:31:00 AM thanks much Cassie.. Congrats too. :)!

Skat A Date: 3/15/2015 11:52:00 PM OLIVE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 6:30:00 AM thank you Skat.. :)!

Abdul Malik Date: 3/15/2015 8:59:00 AM Words of wisdom. Congrats. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/17/2015 7:54:00 PM Thanks much Abdul.. :)! Congrats too.. :)!

James Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 7:32:00 AM Hiya Oliz, many congratulations little one on your Top Spot with this short form packed solid with sheer wisdom. Your poetry always thralls me completely. Blessed Sunday, hugs//James ;-) xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/17/2015 7:40:00 PM Thanks much Dino James.. :)! weeeeee! hugs aplenty!!! :D!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 3/15/2015 7:19:00 AM Beautiful Wise words. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/17/2015 7:25:00 PM Thank you Dane Anne.. :)! God bless us all.. smiles back.. :)!

Paul Callus Date: 3/15/2015 6:42:00 AM It is always wise to live honestly! I love your reasoning, Olive_eloi! Congratulations on being placed 1st:)) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/17/2015 8:37:00 AM Thanks much Paul for loving my reasoning.. :) hugs back,. you won too. :D!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/15/2015 12:38:00 AM Wow Olive such words of wisdom,, congrats on top podium! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/17/2015 8:31:00 AM Thanks much Dr. Upma.. :)!

Eve Roper Date: 3/14/2015 9:47:00 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win. a 7 Blessings dear friend Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 8:41:00 AM Thank you Eve.. :)! I am so glad you liked it.. :)!God bless you!!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2015 9:21:00 PM Congratulations on your win. I just knew he would love this! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 8:34:00 AM thanks much Becca.. :)! COngrats too.. :)!

Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2015 8:20:00 PM dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 8:27:00 AM thanks much JAn.. :)! hugs back.. :D!

Rob Carmack Date: 3/14/2015 8:04:00 PM Olive, loved your poem. Perhaps sometime, you could help me get Andrea out of her grammatical coffin for an overdue break. :) Congrats and TY for entering. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2015 9:19:00 PM hahaha!!! I quite enjoy my coffin!!

Sandra Haight Date: 3/14/2015 7:53:00 PM Congratulation, Olive, on your top win! Wow, girl, you are on a roll! Way to go. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 8:06:00 AM thanks much Sandra.. :)! this my first try and am glad the judge liked it.. :)!

Kim Shaw Date: 3/14/2015 7:23:00 PM The winner!! Congratulations Olive! So well deserved. I love your wisdom. Awesome write. Hugs, Kimberly xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 8:05:00 AM Thanks much Kimberly,,. hugs back too.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2015 6:49:00 PM a lovely message of wisdom, sweetie. IN that last line, it would be improved if you said after the word deeds: we would be permitted wisdom to walk (the word then is not necessary and by removing it, you could add in the needed words "would be" Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/16/2015 8:03:00 AM thanks much Andrea.. :)! I don't really what topic I shall choose for this contest but as I researched I was inspired further that words must be chosen carefully.. hence, this lead me more to choose a subject more seriously.. :)! thanks!

Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2015 8:03:00 AM Wise words ineed Olive - Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 5:33:00 AM thanks much Jan.. :)! Congrats to.. :) hugs back!

James Fraser Date: 3/14/2015 7:06:00 AM Yep, no doubt about it. Your titles are like lures Oliz. Love the seams of wisdom here, top marks indeed, 7 up and a fav. Love it hugs aplenty//James xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/14/2015 8:14:00 AM Dino James, I was attracted to the mathematical way this form has.. :D! but when i tried it on writing its kind hard as really you must think of the words to make your point straight and clear.. :) I was thinking of a good topic to start.. then this came.. thanks much!!!..//olive eloisa hugs!!