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Inspired by this quote:

"Honesty is the first chapter of the book of wisdom. ~Thomas Jefferson"

WHEN WISDOM WALKS Lies, shams, they cloud the truth's eyes. They seed buds of sin which unfolds to depravity, as they... can smother hope or stroke all lobes of the mind but if we let honesty spearheads our deeds then there we permitted wisdom to walk... ______________________________________________ Sponsor Rob Carmack Contest Name Fibonacci ==Placed 1st== O.E. Guillermo 12:32 pm, March 14, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 7:16:00 PM

hehhehe,, Here I am again, checking on your reply... you so sweet...LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/26/2015 10:54:00 PM

:P! :D!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2015 10:52:00 PM

OLIVE, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2015 2:23:00 AM

thanks much Lolly Linda.. :)!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/17/2015 5:02:00 PM

Great fibonacci, Olive! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Kim :) I appreciate it.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/17/2015 8:43:00 AM

Go Olive GO! Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 6:47:00 AM

thanks much Debbie.. :)! wee!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/16/2015 5:15:00 PM

Wow kabayan, top tier! Congrats! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 6:41:00 AM

thanks much KIm.. :)!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2015 2:17:00 PM

Congrats on your awesome win..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 6:32:00 AM

Thank you Sara.. :) I appreciate it.. :)!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/16/2015 8:30:00 AM

Nicely done! Grats on first place !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 6:31:00 AM

thanks much Cassie.. Congrats too. :)!

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 11:52:00 PM

OLIVE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2015 6:30:00 AM

thank you Skat.. :)!

Abdul Malik

Date: 3/15/2015 8:59:00 AM

Words of wisdom. Congrats.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 7:54:00 PM

Thanks much Abdul.. :)! Congrats too.. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 3/15/2015 7:32:00 AM

Hiya Oliz, many congratulations little one on your Top Spot with this short form packed solid with sheer wisdom. Your poetry always thralls me completely. Blessed Sunday, hugs//James ;-) xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 7:40:00 PM

Thanks much Dino James.. :)! weeeeee! hugs aplenty!!! :D!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/15/2015 7:19:00 AM

Beautiful Wise words. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 7:25:00 PM

Thank you Dane Anne.. :)! God bless us all.. smiles back.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2015 6:42:00 AM

It is always wise to live honestly! I love your reasoning, Olive_eloi! Congratulations on being placed 1st:)) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 8:37:00 AM

Thanks much Paul for loving my reasoning.. :) hugs back,. you won too. :D!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/15/2015 12:38:00 AM

Wow Olive such words of wisdom,, congrats on top podium!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/17/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks much Dr. Upma.. :)!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/14/2015 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win. a 7 Blessings dear friend

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Eve.. :)! I am so glad you liked it.. :)!God bless you!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 9:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I just knew he would love this!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 8:34:00 AM

thanks much Becca.. :)! COngrats too.. :)!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2015 8:20:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 8:27:00 AM

thanks much JAn.. :)! hugs back.. :D!

Rob Carmack

Date: 3/14/2015 8:04:00 PM

Olive, loved your poem. Perhaps sometime, you could help me get Andrea out of her grammatical coffin for an overdue break. :) Congrats and TY for entering.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/14/2015 9:19:00 PM

hahaha!!! I quite enjoy my coffin!!

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/14/2015 7:53:00 PM

Congratulation, Olive, on your top win! Wow, girl, you are on a roll! Way to go. Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 8:06:00 AM

thanks much Sandra.. :)! this my first try and am glad the judge liked it.. :)!

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/14/2015 7:23:00 PM

The winner!! Congratulations Olive! So well deserved. I love your wisdom. Awesome write. Hugs, Kimberly xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 8:05:00 AM

Thanks much Kimberly,,. hugs back too.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 6:49:00 PM

a lovely message of wisdom, sweetie. IN that last line, it would be improved if you said after the word deeds: we would be permitted wisdom to walk (the word then is not necessary and by removing it, you could add in the needed words "would be"

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 8:03:00 AM

thanks much Andrea.. :)! I don't really what topic I shall choose for this contest but as I researched I was inspired further that words must be chosen carefully.. hence, this lead me more to choose a subject more seriously.. :)! thanks!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2015 8:03:00 AM

Wise words ineed Olive - Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 5:33:00 AM

thanks much Jan.. :)! Congrats to.. :) hugs back!

James Fraser

Date: 3/14/2015 7:06:00 AM

Yep, no doubt about it. Your titles are like lures Oliz. Love the seams of wisdom here, top marks indeed, 7 up and a fav. Love it hugs aplenty//James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 8:14:00 AM

Dino James, I was attracted to the mathematical way this form has.. :D! but when i tried it on writing its kind hard as really you must think of the words to make your point straight and clear.. :) I was thinking of a good topic to start.. then this came.. thanks much!!!..//olive eloisa hugs!!