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When Will You Learn

#12 Motivational Series When will you learn, you cannot stop me? My voice is mine to speak what I feel I am free to be all I can be All that I choose to pursue is real My freedom is something that I found My voice is mine to speak what I feel I will not turn back or turn around My space is something that I cherish My freedom is something that I found What I choose to do, I will finish I will always have my own safe place My space is something that I cherish I am no longer haunted by your face You do not have power anymore I will always have my own safe place This is your chance to stop doing more When will you learn you cannot stop me? You do not have power anymore I am free to be all I can be Heidi Sands 1/18/19

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Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/19/2019 3:20:00 PM

Heidi. Freedom rings...in the words you write and in the heart you live!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2019 3:27:00 PM

Thank you so much. That means so much to me! You made my day special :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/19/2019 12:08:00 PM

Not familiar with this form of poetry but love the content of it. Well done. love phyl

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2019 12:23:00 PM

Thank you Phyllis. I am happy you like it! I appreciate your comment on this. Have a nice day :)

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2019 8:50:00 AM

I dont think I have ever written one of these... Always be free Heidi, some people never learn..

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2019 8:58:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment. It would be nice to see you write one if these :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/18/2019 11:50:00 PM

Not familiar with this type of poem, but it appears to have very specific guidelines. Very impressive, Heidi. And your strength remains evident.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2019 7:48:00 AM

Hi Sandy. Yes, this form is challenging to do. I like to do them when I am in the mood to lol. Thank you very much. :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2019 10:43:00 PM

Heidi, this is a great terzanelle poem, one of the most important things we need in life is self-assurance. You dissected it well in your write. Love it! Charlie :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2019 7:48:00 AM

Thank you very much Charlie. I am happy to hear that! Have a nice day :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2019 4:11:00 PM

It's truly a remarkable moment when a person rids the excess baggage and learns how wonderful it is to be strong and confident. I have walked away from an abusive relationship and can relate to the feeling you describe, Heidi! I've been enjoying your series. Hugs, Carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2019 4:16:00 PM

Yes Carolyn, it is an amazing feeling. I am so happy to hear that you walked away from an abusive relationship and I am glad that you are enjoying the series! Hugs :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/18/2019 4:10:00 PM

You go Heidi, well done...

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2019 4:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlie! I will :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/18/2019 3:03:00 PM

There is so much freedom and power in believing and trusting yourself. Well said, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2019 3:07:00 PM

Yes, there certainly is, Vijay. Thank you for your visit and feedback on this :)