Heidi Sands Poet Terzanelle

When Will You Learn

#12 Motivational Series


When will you learn, you cannot stop me?
My voice is mine to speak what I feel
I am free to be all I can be

All that I choose to pursue is real
My freedom is something that I found
My voice is mine to speak what I feel

I will not turn back or turn around
My space is something that I cherish
My freedom is something that I found

What I choose to do, I will finish
I will always have my own safe place
My space is something that I cherish

I am no longer haunted by your face
You do not have power anymore
I will always have my own safe place

This is your chance to stop doing more
When will you learn you cannot stop me?
You do not have power anymore
I am free to be all I can be

Heidi Sands  

1/18/19

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Chuck Melugin January 19, 2019 at 3:20 PM Heidi. Freedom rings...in the words you write and in the heart you live! Heidi Sands January 19, 2019 at 3:27 PM Thank you so much. That means so much to me! You made my day special :)

Phyllis Babcock January 19, 2019 at 12:08 PM Not familiar with this form of poetry but love the content of it. Well done. love phyl Heidi Sands January 19, 2019 at 12:23 PM Thank you Phyllis. I am happy you like it! I appreciate your comment on this. Have a nice day :)

Silent One January 19, 2019 at 8:50 AM I dont think I have ever written one of these... Always be free Heidi, some people never learn.. Heidi Sands January 19, 2019 at 8:58 AM Thank you for your visit and comment. It would be nice to see you write one if these :)

Charles Messina January 18, 2019 at 10:43 PM Heidi, this is a great terzanelle poem, one of the most important things we need in life is self-assurance. You dissected it well in your write. Love it! Charlie :) Heidi Sands January 19, 2019 at 7:48 AM Thank you very much Charlie. I am happy to hear that! Have a nice day :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 18, 2019 at 4:11 PM It's truly a remarkable moment when a person rids the excess baggage and learns how wonderful it is to be strong and confident. I have walked away from an abusive relationship and can relate to the feeling you describe, Heidi! I've been enjoying your series. Hugs, Carolyn Heidi Sands January 18, 2019 at 4:16 PM Yes Carolyn, it is an amazing feeling. I am so happy to hear that you walked away from an abusive relationship and I am glad that you are enjoying the series! Hugs :)

Charlie Smith January 18, 2019 at 4:10 PM You go Heidi, well done... Heidi Sands January 18, 2019 at 4:15 PM Thank you so much Charlie! I will :)

Vijay Pandit January 18, 2019 at 3:03 PM There is so much freedom and power in believing and trusting yourself. Well said, Heidi. Heidi Sands January 18, 2019 at 3:07 PM Yes, there certainly is, Vijay. Thank you for your visit and feedback on this :)