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When Will I See You Again My Love

When will I see you again my love......

When will I see you again my love 
Days have gone and your presence is still absent 
The pain is so deep in my heart without being with you 
I miss your sweet voice and not hearing your soft breath 
There is no music of love or happiness here without you 
The emptiness of darkness is built around in me 
Leaving nothing but your thoughts are in my heart 
My soul can reach you wherever you are there 
But my love cannot reach you unless you are close to me 
My nights have made me wept and no one here to wipe my tears away 
You are forever with me in my thoughts and my dreams 
I am waiting here for your undying love 
Tell me my love, when will I see you again. 

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/31/2017 12:02:00 PM What a beautiful expression of love yearning for the beloved! I love this wonderful romantic piece! This is such an enjoyable read my friend! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply

Faraz Ajmal Date: 6/16/2017 10:36:00 AM A very sad but beautifully written poem, it s true when someone so close to you leaves you or went away, it seems like you ve become incomplete, it seems that your purpose of living has ended, a very beautiful poem, however i m new and have two poems of similar category" I shall never see you again" and "you were the purpose of my life", I wanted you to go read my poems and tell me how you feel about them, the first poem I mention is very beautiful Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/16/2017 6:10:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/31/2017 2:34:00 PM Your yearning heart is exposed in this passionate piece, so beautifully Ravi. 7 ; ) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/7/2017 12:14:00 AM Thank for your lovely comment my dear friend . Very much appreciated.

Anne-Marie Coreggia Date: 5/30/2017 2:40:00 PM Ravi, you have such a way of expressing your feelings that you give an immediacy to your suffering and we feel its sting. It's beautifully done:) Amitiés Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/7/2017 12:15:00 AM Thank for your lovely comment my dear friend . Very much appreciated.

Paul Callus Date: 5/30/2017 11:12:00 AM Longing tinged with sadness can be felt throughout this lovely romantic poem, Ravi. I notice that this topic is very close to your heart. Regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/7/2017 12:15:00 AM Thank for your lovely comment my dear friend . Very much appreciated.

Jan Allison Date: 5/29/2017 12:02:00 PM i feel quite emotional reading this Ravi - beautifully expressed but so sad:-( hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2017 10:15:00 AM As peter said, it's sad and beautiful at the same time. Sometimes we just need to bare the soul! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/7/2017 12:15:00 AM Thank for your lovely comment my dear friend Andrea. Very much appreciated. Hugs

Akkina Downing Date: 5/29/2017 5:01:00 AM Love is the sweetest yet when it hurts it breaks us... A heartfelt, Ravi. You expressed this so much, some may relate to it too. Beautiful :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/7/2017 12:16:00 AM Thank for your lovely comment my dear friend Akkina. Very much appreciated. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2017 3:53:00 AM - "My soul can reach you wherever you are there But my love cannot reach you unless you are close to me " .... heartbreaking lines, Ravi - A beautiful and touching poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/7/2017 12:14:00 AM Thank for your lovely comment my dear friend Anne. Very much appreciated. Love and Hugs...Ravi