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When Will I Not Love You

When will I not love you shall there be a distant flame flickering beyond the warmth of an Indian summer's sultry breeze When will I not love you will the sun rest on top of giant umbrellas dancing heavenly about sparkling shores When will I not love you shall the roaring tides rise over broken sea shells sending the tiny crabs back inside hidden cubby holes When will I not love you will the standing vessels finally set sail upon the calming Voss seas cunning seduction banks of marigolds from ancient good byes as new worlds collides gleaming about sullen memories When will i not love you when

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Date: 10/22/2023 7:03:00 AM
I love the imagery.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 1/17/2024 3:46:00 AM
Thank you so much many blessings.
Date: 10/22/2023 2:34:00 AM
Warmth and love oozes from your words Yolande. This is a lovely lyrical poem. Cheers - Gary
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 1/17/2024 3:47:00 AM
Thank you for you kindness many blessings.
Date: 10/21/2023 7:35:00 AM
This is so romantic and deeply heartfelt. Just lovely.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 1/17/2024 3:47:00 AM
Thank you Karen sending hugs many blessings .
Date: 10/19/2023 5:44:00 AM
Oh my! lovely lovely lovely!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/21/2023 3:00:00 AM
Thank you very kindly Joyce...hugs
Date: 10/8/2023 2:13:00 AM
Waxing lyrical with romantic insinuation, though in my mind I see it through a metaphorical lens, Yolanda. ~ Best regards // paul
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/21/2023 3:00:00 AM
Thank you Paul..
Date: 9/27/2023 12:44:00 PM
Lovely love poem so romantic!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/21/2023 3:01:00 AM
Thanks Sweetie..
Date: 9/23/2023 7:14:00 AM
It looks like you will love him forever.. lovely poem of devotion.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/21/2023 3:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment..

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