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When When Was

closing my eyes i drunkenly wonder why for what may i dream a dream beyond what I'm living and yet she is so colorful in clothes hair and lips but now i REM and remember her as she was but everytime i dream her she is in black and white

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Date: 7/19/2019 1:13:00 AM
I feel like I am living these thoughts as they occur. It has a smoothness about it, Jeff.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/19/2019 2:12:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comment Caren.

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