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When We Were Young

We run when it rains We lie on the ground And stare at those stars You said its 5000 stars up there And I was eight And believe you of course You were nine that time Two years after that I asked you I say "How did you know" Then you said "know what"? About the stars, "I count it", she said "I dont believe you", I said Then you say: "I dont care, you want some ice cream" Then we both walk towards your place It was cold that time And your father was on the terrace Smoking his half lighted cigarette And said hi to him He said hello Vanilla that was the ice cream You manage to stretch your hand And made a loud sigh when you at last had a grip on the ice cream I remember sitting While watching you preparing A two scoop of ice cream for me And just one for you "We need to be equal" , I said "Whats the point?", she said "Nothing, its not fair for you", I said "It is fair, because Im on a diet I want to be a model someday. And you need to eat more Cause your going to be my bodyguard" she said -comments please mate- TY

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Date: 6/20/2013 8:51:00 AM
Hello Carlo, awe, a nice poem, and narrative story .... glad she feels protection in you.... LUV~ SKAT
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Mon Carlo Tamine
Date: 6/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
Thank you.

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