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When We Are Apart

Each day all my treasured thoughts, you lay claim While minutes stretch and I search for patience Restlessness arrives and your love I'll blame Desire calls and the heart yearns in absence When do I not search my heart's space for you? Alone in the world, no matter the crowd To sense you close and feel these thoughts so true To reach inside, still them from ringing loud And know loneliness with its reservior When I hear whispers from your voice within They move across worlds and their farthest star And speak to me, it's where our love begins To find soft caresses, when my love's sought This sanctuary, of you in my thought contest..Relationships 7/25/14

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Date: 7/29/2014 1:14:00 PM
well done Frederic... PD
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:27:00 PM
Big congrats on a great win and fine write!!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:26:00 AM
Hi Frederic, huge congratulations on your great well-deserved win. Pandita
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Frederic. Kika
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Date: 7/28/2014 4:48:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on love, Frederic, congrats
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Date: 7/25/2014 9:51:00 PM
You sure thought of a great way to do this challenge. this is a real beauty on relationships. yes, indeed!
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Date: 7/25/2014 9:44:00 PM
Wow! These entries for this write are awesome... "To reach inside, still them from ringing loud And know loneliness with its reservior When I hear whispers from your voice within They move across worlds and their farthest star And speak to me, it's where our love begins To find soft caresses, when my love's sought This sanctuary, of you in my thought" pm on the way..
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Date: 7/25/2014 8:37:00 PM
How beautiful this is ! Best wishes for the contest...love, Deb
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:37:00 PM
This is a tender and romantic write . good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx
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