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When We Are Alone

Alone with you the world fades away as you hold me so closely tender lips against my ear whispering sweet somethings burn me with their heat and your voice deep with desire ignitites me dissolves me and I am gone lost to everything but the music we make and growing need turning urgent overtaking me until I'm pleading for you to close the distance that lies between us and my shudder unnerves you as you are sharing in my wealth nestled in my warmth taking me over until I'm singing sweet praises to heaven and you join me at its gate sweet lullaby of joy surrounds us rocking us gently to sleep when we are alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/6/2009 5:29:00 AM
"whispering sweet somethings" I love that line, amazing work...Raul
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Date: 2/15/2009 11:47:00 AM
Halleluyah! Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 2/4/2009 5:31:00 AM
This is an awesome write Robin. I can feel the love and passion that flows through this piece. The voice speaks with such warmth...great piece..Thanks for your constant support Robin.
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:40:00 AM
Yowza. Yowza??? ~lol~ Where did that word come from??? Gosh Robin, another really excellent hot & steamy write. Quite tender and dreamy, too. Passion is a beautiful thing. What were those vitamins again??? : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:17:00 AM
i cant believe you were just in town writing to me and i missed you AWWWWWG!!! john
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Date: 2/3/2009 7:19:00 AM
Lovely visuals in this one, oh yeah! It's so gentle and you can pick up on the loving tone in this for a wonderful read. Michael
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