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When We All Fall Down

blood pours through his fingers, as she left his heart to bleed, lost in crushing pain, without the love he'll need, waiting for a heart, that isn't mine to take, knowing at the start, that all of it was fake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/29/2012 7:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Jezabella. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2012 8:16:00 AM
Good morning Ravindra, .I agree hair can be so mysterious, bringing out passion in ones way...this is one amazing poem, have yourself a wonderful day~always pd
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Date: 3/28/2012 8:16:00 AM
Good morning Ravindra, .I agree hair can be so mysterious, bringing out passion in ones way...this is one amazing poem, have yourself a wonderful day~always pd
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Date: 3/28/2012 8:31:00 AM
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Date: 3/28/2012 8:14:00 AM
Jezabella, one can knock one to the ground with lies alone..I agree..this is one amazing poem, have yourself a wonderful day~always pd
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