When Time Is Standstill

The time was standstill somewhere, 
There were only two eyes and two chairs
There was a pulse and two people
For a while, everything was hanging.

And they were neither top nor down; 
The music stream was flowing around-
The sound was moderate and in a tranquil, 
They were sitting at a coffee shop.

The wind was silent, 
The birds stopped flying, 
No sound was heard anywhere, 
The waiter didn't not come for the order.

Some camel made sand storms, 
The sand was standing around the cup and the plate; 
Suddenly the time began to move, 
The two minds start to breathtaking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
DiMino Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 8:57 AM
A moment in time, perfectly captured. Great write!
Hossain Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:34 AM
Thanks a lot. It must be appreciated.
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