When Through My Window

When through my window flew a tiny bird,
she straightway went to where she chose to roost.
I laughed because it seemed a bit absurd
her perching on my bed post! I deduced
she'd lost her way, but now that she was here,
she seemed at home. She cocked her head at me
as if she had a thing to say. No fear
did she display, no sign that she would flee.
She had the sky and trees. What could she need
inside my little room? Why did she stay?
I offered her, from open hand, a seed.
She bent and pecked at it right where it lay.
The world is huge. . . we're free! Yet what explains
that from my room now pours a bird's sweet strains?

Oct. 11, 2019
For Writing Challenge, October 2019 - Bird - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobe Ode

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Date: 10/25/2019 6:24:00 PM
Andrea, bed post, sounds like my sister-in laws parrots ;congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2019 7:10:00 PM
Lovely sonnet Andrea, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/22/2019 11:27:00 AM
Andrea congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this impressive poem. I found it sweet and delightful!
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Date: 10/21/2019 9:56:00 AM
Nice write and good luck in the contest. The only thing that flew in my wind was in-flu-enza.Have a good one.
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Date: 10/20/2019 5:47:00 PM
a super sonnet, many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/20/2019 1:20:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Andrea ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2019 10:32:00 AM
You always undo yourself with your masterpieces. Refined and fine, I'm grateful because its beautiful, great lines with fire, connecting me like a wire, shows the glory of your hand and the power of your mind. An excellent piece my friend.
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Date: 10/13/2019 8:56:00 PM
The way you write Andrea, I can never tell if it's fiction or real. You'll have to let me know. This is such a lovely moment, real or otherwise. <3
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:08:00 PM
thanks, Leslie. It was not a true story. One clue: I never have windows open in my house. haha
Date: 10/12/2019 4:43:00 PM
Andrea, I like your poem with oh so nice a title 'When Through My Window'. I could see and hear in the moment of your wonderful write. What a nice moment it was. May good luck be your friend. -Richard
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Date: 10/12/2019 2:39:00 PM
A tiny bird!! I can totally imagine it! Very nicely written story Andrea!!
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Date: 10/12/2019 6:32:00 AM
What a lovely story..and so well written! Excellent poetry, Andrea.
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Date: 10/12/2019 12:51:00 AM
What a beautiful poem this is, Andrea, Having read your poetry for years now, and yes sadly, never enough comments have i had the time to give, yet your pen goes on and on, and one can never tier, of the results,,This to my fav, your poem has prompted me to look at my 'Bird Lady poem, and maybe enter into 'Dear Heart's contest.
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Date: 10/11/2019 11:52:00 PM
I love this, Andrea!! A wonderful sonnet and a great story ~ I'd shake my tail feathers if I found out it was true! (not the way you might imagine ;) lol.
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Date: 10/11/2019 10:52:00 PM
Absolutely lovely, Andrea.
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Date: 10/11/2019 9:25:00 PM
Very nice sonnet, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings and love, Gina
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