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When Things Returned To Green

The ruination of the mighty earth Was started when explosions rocked the sky. Ten years of darkness followed. . . then a heat, And that is when the world began to fry! Soon the oceans crept upon the coastlines. Stubble lay in fields and great trees died. No more was there order to the seasons. Hopelessness prevailed. All nature cried. But two superior (when darkness reigned) Were born, a legacy to wizardry, And 50 years kept hidden from Earth’s blight, They’d grown alone contained beneath the sea. Their under-water habitat released And floated to the surface. What was seen When they emerged and stepped onto dry land: Were luscious fruits among lush splendid green! With altered genes, they’d live perhaps forever. But not in sin, for they could not perceive A right from wrong. The garden’s jaded snake Was stupefied to see Beth-Ann with Eve!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/7/2015 11:17:00 PM
Well the ending has a twist. LOL, Andrea, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 6/7/2015 2:37:00 PM
Yes !! A Number Won !! We expect and always receive !
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Date: 6/7/2015 8:42:00 AM
congratulations Miss Number Won
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Date: 6/7/2015 1:06:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/28/2015 11:39:00 AM
LOL! What an ending...never would have expected it! 7. Enjoy your weekend, Andrea. :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 7:43:00 AM
LMAO - love the surprised ending
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:49:00 PM
I love this imaginative write and the twist ending...LOL...didn't see that coming!
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Date: 3/23/2015 6:08:00 PM
great pen Andrea enjoyed the humour too hugs 7
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Date: 3/23/2015 1:20:00 PM
Love your creativity on the theme and the humour in the final stanza - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/23/2015 10:25:00 AM
Wow Andrea, you have really surprised me with this write. It is excellently written but very bold in its conclusion. Good for you. Got to fav this one for sure!
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Date: 3/23/2015 7:39:00 AM
Andrea, this is an exceptional and enthralling Quatrain poem, so creative, a perfect 7 and best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for visiting my poem, patience, you know how hard that was for ME to write funny !!!
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Date: 3/23/2015 4:33:00 AM
Excellent. Very interesting write. Enjoyed.
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Date: 3/23/2015 12:45:00 AM
I love your imagination Andrea. This was so much fun to read and had a great surprise ending. If this is your Green poem for the contest, I don't see how it will NOT be on the winner's list! 7
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Date: 3/22/2015 11:14:00 PM
Had me stringing along on this write Andrea ! Hehe, reminds me of my "You Tarzan Me James"...Great write dear poet ! Oh, and by the way, I'm about to post another Monoku....little on the****** side. Have a wonderful...whatever time it is where you are ;) Much love, james
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:17:00 PM
Hi Andrea, it's been awhile. Hope all is well. I continue to dabble and write from time to time as things move me to do so. Often look at your positive comments and appreciate the encouragement. Gail
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Date: 3/22/2015 8:58:00 PM
This work is an interesting new spin on creation! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/22/2015 5:11:00 PM
most interesting pen andrea really got the mind working overtime beautifully crafted piece dear pal wishing you a blessed day
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Date: 3/22/2015 5:07:00 PM
Your descriptive words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination and your innate talent. Emile.
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Date: 3/22/2015 4:11:00 PM
: )I really love this sweet lady,Have a happy Sunday: )
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Date: 3/22/2015 2:55:00 PM
You have a fine sense of humor sis. Totally weird and quirky ending.
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Date: 3/22/2015 2:48:00 PM
Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page and also for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2015 11:34:00 AM
Love it Andrea...lol...quite imaginative
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