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When They Were Young

Kites Colors In the sky Children's laughter I can remember many years after

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Date: 8/22/2009 5:01:00 PM

Very nice, I enjoyed the blog on haiku and other forms also, informative.

Date: 8/8/2009 8:28:00 AM

I still fly kites.........its a simple wonderful experience--i love it--beautiful Tetractys===charma

Date: 8/8/2009 8:27:00 AM

One of your best in this genre.Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts

Date: 8/8/2009 8:10:00 AM

I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morning Jim. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Date: 8/8/2009 7:45:00 AM

We still fly kites with our grandchildren in the meadow across our road....I hope they too will remember many years after.....:)

Date: 8/8/2009 7:09:00 AM

Beautiful memories. Sara