When They Were Young

Kites
Colors
In the sky
Children's laughter
I can remember many years after
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Very nice, I enjoyed the blog on haiku and other forms also, informative.
Chircop Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 8:28 AM
I still fly kites.........its a simple wonderful experience--i love it--beautiful Tetractys===charma
Strand Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 8:27 AM
One of your best in this genre.Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
Brown Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 8:10 AM
I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morning Jim. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 7:45 AM
We still fly kites with our grandchildren in the meadow across our road....I hope they too will remember many years after.....:)
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 7:09 AM
Beautiful memories. Sara
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