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When They Meet Again

When they meet again…… All those lights fade… Met face to face, With a fake smile. Wanted to become friends, But all those fake promises, Made them feel like strangers. All those jovial memories, Turned into a formal conversation. Wanted to get back, But they couldn't, Their ego ceased….. Finally moved on , With the broken hearts, Like a star in the sky.….

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/16/2020 1:19:00 AM

Jennithau, good "teaching" poems about love, lies, & learning to live. Lots to offer readers in a few lines. I deduce this from: "Wanted to become friends, But all those fake promises ...." It could apply to INTERNET dating, & many scenarios. ThanX (but re-check for punctuation. eg. How many dots at end?) shalom, shalOM. Brother Deo

Jennithau Joan Of Ark
Date: 5/16/2020 1:33:00 AM

Thanks for your complements bro Those dots have been included just for a continuity and I will correct those mistakes in my next upcoming poems