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Contest Love Jones

sponsor Karen Jones

My love is my passion

The serenity of sensual surrender causes our hearts to tenderly bloom like a thousand lilac-colored roses and purple orchids whose fragrance lingers beyond our yesterday into tomorrows from every emotional breath taken where their savored scent nourishes our souls into a sweet fervor of submission which we cleave to with each kiss turning our wishes into dreams through the resplendent colors of the day into the night where we offer our treasures as a gift beneath the stars and halo moonlight that lays on the face and hair of love where we hear the sound of trembling heartbeats ascending like two birds gliding on the winds of heaven soaring beyond the glimmering starlights that blaze across the sky lighting the way before us leading us into a universe of passionate intoxication, where lovers get drunk on the eternal ecstasy of love

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Date: 12/1/2023 2:46:00 AM
You always write romance so very well dear Frederick. Not sure where to start with appreciating this absolutely gorgeous and fragrant poem that flows with such heartfelt emotions and soulful imagery .. from flowers to moon and all that nature has to offer used to depict such beautiful love. Brilliant ending too. Im sure this will do so well in the contest. Goodluck
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Date: 11/29/2023 5:59:00 PM
If love had been like that for me, I'd still be married. You always have been good at love poems, Frederic. Nice write:)
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